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So In Love

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Aimster
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0 posted 05-22-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

So in Love
Amy M. Kennedy

~guys i got it bad lol! hope you all like this one.

Shining stars overheard sparkle from high above
Willow trees dance to the music which only we can hear
Holding you tight in my arms, so completely in love
You look into my eyes, our bodies so near

Summer nights long and full of such heat
You run your fingers through my hair
Our lips finally entwine in tender passion as they meet
Suddenly I feel free, and haven't a single care

Ahh the sound of love, messages from our hearts
You whisper your love, as I whisper mine too
Then the true Passion starts
Liquid fire goes through my body, as you say "I love you"

Your love is so sweet, I get so weak at just the thought of you and me
Under the moon we dance together
Eyes so blue is all that I can see
As we whisper the beautiful words of forever.




 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 05-22-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Yep, sounds like you really do have it bad! LOL  You go girl!    A well-written beautiful piece, but then again love is always beautiful to write about    Hey, maybe he's "the one."

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
netswan
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2 posted 05-22-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

hahaha Amy, yep you got it bad -----ENJOY

This is a beautiful poem, Amy, I just love
it.

~netswan
Janet Marie
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3 posted 05-23-2000 02:05 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

you got it bad but this poem is WAY GOOD!!
amy-girl this is awesome,
your writing is growing by leaps and bounds.
this is excellent,
the rhyme is so great and the imagery is as well
this is one of my fav pieces by you.
more more more  
jm


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


JamesMichael
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4 posted 05-23-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Shining stars overhead sparkle from high above
Willow trees dance to the music only we can hear."
Sounds like a wonderful romantic experience...now forget about this computer for awhile and enjoy the beauty of love.  James
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5 posted 06-25-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I liked it a lot!!!!! Nice poem!!!!!!
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