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My Turn

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Kevin
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0 posted 05-22-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

My sun is setting,
The time has come,
For me to take another stride.

With conscience letting,
And feelings numb,
I sit back to enjoy the ride.

I Wont remain,
Without a light,
My aspirations brightly burn.

And though some pain,
May be in sight,
It cant keep me, from my turn.
© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
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1 posted 05-22-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Kevin,...I believe this is the first of you I've read, and I like, I like.  ~Lots~   I'm glad that you won't let it keep you from your turn.  *This is a great post.
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


2 posted 05-22-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Kevin

so glad to see your posting again. i have missed reading your work. this is an excellent poem. you amaze me with your talent. love this piece and its uplifting theme.

take care,
amy  


 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

WhiteNite
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3 posted 05-22-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Cool poem.  Quite inspirational. =)  Thanks. --Dave

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


Meadowmuse
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4 posted 05-22-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Kevin, I enjoyed the symbolism here...Heavenly, dear poet...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Parker
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5 posted 05-24-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Kevin, glad to see you back now and again. This is pure Kevin.... there are so many new poets here you should post some of your old ones, Id like to see some of them again and I'm sure so would they.

Parker
 
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