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First Love

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jerryssss
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0 posted 05-22-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for jerryssss   Email jerryssss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jerryssss

Dreamworld.

There is a place, told to me
So precious, so pure, so heavenly,
Where hand in hand, cheek to cheek,
I kiss the only one, for whom my heart beats.

Her gaze would make me quiver,
With joy and delight,
Her caress - a charmed beckoning,
Enthralling me into this world so enchanting,

Of lavished orchards with scented roses,
And of clear, mystical, starry nights,
Where the scent of passion lingers and abounds,
Amidst two star-crossed loversí fervent sounds.

This world I dream of, my lover and me,
Keeps me going, when I canít see thee,
A tortured desire to be close to you,
Oh how I long for my dream to come true.

© Copyright 2000 jerryssss - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 05-22-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Jerry--

this is breathtaking! you have some lovely expressions here. true poetry from your pen here my dear! great job. i look forward to reading much more of your work

~Amy~


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Corinne
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2 posted 05-22-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Lovely!

Welcome to Passions, too!

Corinne
SpitFire
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3 posted 05-22-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Welcome, welcome!!! This is beautiful.  I look forward to your future posts. .
Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 05-22-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


What a wonderful entrance you have made, this is a beatiful weave of words!! Welcome to Passions!


 The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams

~Eleanor Roosevelt~
Meadowmuse
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5 posted 05-22-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Your dream is expressed quite eloquently in this verse...lovely writing. Welcome...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

netswan
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6 posted 05-22-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions and my what a passionate
pen you have brought here with you, Jerry.

Fantastic, poem full of imagery and rhythm

~netswan
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7 posted 05-23-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jerry~
First post - 'First Love'
Welcome to Passion's
Enjoyed the sentiments you expressed.
~*Marge*~


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Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 05-23-2000 07:52 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

WELCOME TO PASSIONS,

You have entered in a unique fashion, with lots of style, panache and lovely images...

Enjoy your stay here and make yourself comfortable.

Regards,
Sudhir

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
CocoBaci
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9 posted 05-23-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Jerry, I adore these verses you write!
CocoBaci
Ethan Halo
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10 posted 05-23-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

Welcome to the party, my friend. good stuff here. very Shakespeare-esque. and he is a tough act to follow and still have the words flow with purpose. this has great imagery. keep it up. i dig it.

Welcome again. enjoy your stay.


 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.
 
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