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Echo's Stir

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 05-22-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel




Painful tears
   dwell and form
      the saddest cascade
          and they
flow swiftly over pebbles
  she knows will become
       mountains
weak trees sway but
             only one way
        and the wind
           catches her breath

      in the distance
     an angel  sings
her calamity's

   will she become
             untouchable?


Oh and she sings
       of promises she is
unable to bare, for they
      may break a heart,
a heart of gold

  echo's stir and the mirror
     catches the sun
lighting the way to
         the past

she contemplates



 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-22-2000).]
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 05-22-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow....I am speechless at the beauty of this....lovely..lovely!!! Give this girl some pie!! (private joke folks!)...
Martie
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2 posted 05-22-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So moody and exquisitely written...loved it!
Aimster
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3 posted 05-22-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

I LOVED this piece. the title is what intially captured my interest! but the rest is purely awesome as well! i also really liked the format you used...very attractive and pretty!

take care,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Honeybee
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4 posted 05-22-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Wow!  Simply amazing!  You have a way with words.  Excellent format!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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5 posted 05-22-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
This is simply beautiful !
So laced with lovely thoughts.
What a treasure !
Your muse has sung a song of longing.
~*Marge*~



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6 posted 05-22-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

DA, I am also speechless at the true beauty of this

"echo's stir and the mirror
     catches the sun
lighting the way to
         the past"

The mirror shows us the past, and guides us to that which we must learn. . .

Excellent my friend. . .

------------------------------------------------------------


 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Rosebud1229
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7 posted 05-23-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

dark angel, I loved this was very beautiful. The words were very touching.

 
netswan
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8 posted 05-23-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh, sigh, Dark Angel - simply beautiful.

~netswan
WhtDove
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Alright! You've taken my breath away with this one! More than Excellent DA!

This is just STUNNING!

You should find music to this one!  WOOHOO terrific work, fabulouso! Fantastico!!
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~This is truly great work,..great expression.  It's a masterpiece...   Bravo!!!
Dark Angel
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11 posted 05-24-2000 01:47 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW, thank you all so very much for your kind replies and lovely compliments   I appreciate them all   *hugs*

Oh and Sharon, make that "Lemon" please  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Severn
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12 posted 05-24-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow Maree...this is just beautiful.

Bit late in coming hon - but hey...here I am!

Oh - and I want in on the Lemon pie joke you two!!!!!!

K
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