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Echo's Stir
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Echo's Stir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Painful tears dwell and form the saddest cascade and they flow swiftly over pebbles she knows will become mountains weak trees sway but only one way and the wind catches her breath in the distance an angel sings her calamity's will she become untouchable? Oh and she sings of promises she is unable to bare, for they may break a heart, a heart of gold echo's stir and the mirror catches the sun lighting the way to the past she contemplates < !signature--> Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-22-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow....I am speechless at the beauty of this....lovely..lovely!!! Give this girl some pie!! (private joke folks!)... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So moody and exquisitely written...loved it! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I LOVED this piece. the title is what intially captured my interest! but the rest is purely awesome as well! i also really liked the format you used...very attractive and pretty! take care, amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! Simply amazing! You have a way with words. Excellent format! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This is simply beautiful ! So laced with lovely thoughts. What a treasure ! Your muse has sung a song of longing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DA, I am also speechless at the true beauty of this "echo's stir and the mirror catches the sun lighting the way to the past" The mirror shows us the past, and guides us to that which we must learn. . . Excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
dark angel, I loved this was very beautiful. The words were very touching. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh, sigh, Dark Angel - simply beautiful. ~netswan |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Alright! You've taken my breath away with this one! More than Excellent DA! This is just STUNNING! You should find music to this one! WOOHOO terrific work, fabulouso! Fantastico!! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is truly great work,..great expression. It's a masterpiece... Bravo!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, thank you all so very much for your kind replies and lovely compliments I appreciate them all *hugs*Oh and Sharon, make that "Lemon" please  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow Maree...this is just beautiful. Bit late in coming hon - but hey...here I am! Oh - and I want in on the Lemon pie joke you two!!!!!! K |
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