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Aniety Relieved
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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Anxiety Relieved I felt my lips touch yours I almost lost my breath The anxiety of it all felt almost like death You tenderly kiss my lips looking into my eyes to gauge my reaction I slowly smile & start to kiss you back Oh how I want this to last You gentley place your hand upon my face your other hand running up my back looking for a place I have waited it seems an eternity for this kind of touch..to hear my heart pound & to feel my blood rush Kiss me for an eternity..take me, hold me, touch me...just never let me go... |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
That was so adorablly sweet  . I know I feel like that anytime the one I love kisses me. Just wishing they would never let go. Great poem  .~Susie P.S. Welcom to Passions  "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A first kiss! You described it perfectly... makes me smile just to think about it..  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This was great! loved the entire poem and how it flowed. you captured the magic of a first kiss!! amy great poem! ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Holly~ Lovely thoughts ..... ahhhhhh ! Such *sighs* of love .... Enjoyed the beauty of your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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