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Aniety Relieved

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Holly
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Anxiety Relieved


I felt my lips touch yours
I almost lost my breath
The anxiety of it all felt almost like death
You tenderly kiss my lips
looking into my eyes to gauge my reaction
I slowly smile & start to kiss you back
Oh how I want this to last

You gentley place your hand upon my face
your other hand running up my back
looking for a place
I have waited it seems an eternity for this
kind of touch..to hear my heart pound & to
feel my blood rush
Kiss me for an eternity..take me, hold me,
touch me...just never let me go...



 
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Angel
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That was so adorablly sweet  . I know I feel like that anytime the one I love kisses me. Just wishing they would never let go. Great poem  .

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A first kiss! You described it perfectly... makes me smile just to think about it..  
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This was great! loved the entire poem and how it flowed. you captured the magic of a first kiss!!

amy  
great poem!

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Holly~
Lovely thoughts ..... ahhhhhh !
Such *sighs* of love ....
Enjoyed the beauty of your heart.
~*Marge*~


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