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Ache at 4 AM

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Aimster
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0 posted 05-22-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

Ache at 4 AM
Amy M. Kennedy

It's 4 AM and there's such an ache in my heart
Tears slide down my lashes onto my face
Lonliness surrounds me due to our being apart
Missing you so much, trying to hold on with some grace

I can hear the rain, the thundering, and lightning
Holding my arms out, wishing you were here
This feeling is so scary and frightning
And slowly from my eye, falls another tear

My heart feels empty, you should be with me
But for reasons neither of us can control I'm here and you're there
Heart feeling heavy, tears blur my vision, I can barely breathe or see
I know you miss me just as much, even though you're not here...I can feel your stare

You are my true love, and I will never let you go
Somehow we will find a way to be together
I toss and turn but I can't sleep
When I finally am in your arms, I'll hold on forever

Sweetheart I love you!


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 05-22-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Four a.m. is the hardest time of the night to be awake and lonely..too early to get up and too late to go back to sleep...
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 05-22-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Aimster,
Agree with PoetdeVine. Enjoyed the read.
netswan
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3 posted 05-23-2000 12:34 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh, my Amy - the 4 o'clock in the morn'
blues -----Best get up and turn your computer
on --)

Wonderful poem - enjoyed reading it.

~netswan
Janet Marie
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4 posted 05-23-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oh yeah
you KNOW i relate to this...LOL
my ache is working overtime these days
more like 24-7  
perfect poem amy...
you ache divinely
later-gator-girl
loves ya,
jm
Ethan Halo
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5 posted 05-23-2000 03:23 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

Fabulously done. i relate a lot to this, even though it'sbeen a while since i've wanted to feel that way for a person. this was really well written, and the insomnia truly seeps through the lines. i dig it.

oh, and i always have trouble at three am... but never four. hmmm... i don't know. Because PoetDevine has an interesting point.
whatever


 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 05-23-2000 08:08 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed reading this...I've had a few of them 4:00 a.m. ache's.   James
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