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invasion/destruction (part three)

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gnosis
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since 05-14-2000
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0 posted 05-22-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for gnosis   Email gnosis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit gnosis's Home Page   View IP for gnosis

this is lyrics for a song by my band gnosis

(so i) tried to get inside
(tried) to work my way in)
tried to bring it all down
cover up all within

(now i'm) looking for something
(somewhere) in shattered remains
now i've brought it all down
(and i) can't erase the stains

it's so slowly decayed
still can't tell what's been frayed
something so long delayed
could never have been saved
(or so i thought)

(so i've) put it back together
(but) nothing seems to fit
we're in this together
(but i) still can't deal with all this sh*t

the void has been filled with a hole
my death has been killed by my soul
i just need to get out




[This message has been edited by gnosis (edited 05-22-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 jason - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 05-25-99
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1 posted 05-22-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

great poem, kiddo... full of emotion and imagery ... but i would expect nothing less from you

now get back to work! hehe  
luv, mom
 
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