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the slow, slow cure

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Pieces of ice, fresh from refrigerator frost,
asked (in their dry voices) for my help.
"We see you burned your legs," they said.
"Help us melt away."

"But what about my pain?" I asked.

"Oh yes. Yes.
We'll get to that, too."

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oman big smiles yuh yuh
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"But what about my pain?" I asked.

"Oh yes. Yes.
We'll get to that, too."
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comfortably numb?
tanned and rested
        or
burned and tested
cool poem...
next time wear sunblock  
jm/bs

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


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Clever thing.   Very nice---Jabberwocky (sp.?) in it's feel...have been ice blue without you.....
 
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