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Dirge for Love
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Dirge for Love |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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To have once felt love. Now just a memory to me Cast a lingering feeling Of what should be Innocent look in your caring eyes The beat of my heart Was not shadowed with lies My strength from the start Beginning anew But locked in my mind My feelings for you Through all will in time There are no true answers Just lessons to learn From the pictures of moments Life’s twist and turns I lie awake in a sleep Trying to see If I could fix the memory Change the ending to be A happy one. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Good start for happy ending...Soul ties are difficult to break, and they are never really broken, just re-adjusted... Everything is as it should be... especially this poem. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Serenity not an easy step but a step anyway thank you |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh, my, Spiked this poem deserves to be read. Do not feel bad, this happens a lot with so many readers and so many poems to be read. This one is wonderful, so back to the top netswan |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Netswan I enjoy posting here just to give it the opportunity to be read. Although not nessasary comments are much appreciated. Good to get this on paper sometimes |
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