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Dirge for Love

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spiked
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since 01-13-2000
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Hammond, La USA


0 posted 05-22-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked


To have once felt love.
Now just a memory to me
Cast a lingering feeling
Of what should be

Innocent look in your caring eyes
The beat of my heart
Was  not shadowed with lies
My strength from the start

Beginning anew
But locked in my mind
My feelings for you
Through all will in time

There are no true answers
Just lessons to learn
From the pictures of moments
Life’s twist and turns

I lie awake in a sleep
Trying to see
If I could fix the memory
Change the ending to be
A happy one.

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 02-02-2000
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1 posted 05-22-2000 01:21 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Good start for happy ending...Soul ties are difficult to break, and they are never really broken, just re-adjusted...

Everything is as it should be...
especially this poem.
spiked
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Posts 886
Hammond, La USA


2 posted 05-22-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Serenity
not an easy step
but a step anyway
thank you
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
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3 posted 05-22-2000 05:33 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh, my, Spiked this poem deserves to be
read.  Do not feel bad, this happens a lot
with so many readers and so many poems
to be read.

This one is wonderful, so back to the top

netswan
spiked
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Posts 886
Hammond, La USA


4 posted 05-22-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thanks Netswan
I enjoy posting here just to give it the opportunity to be read. Although not nessasary comments are much appreciated.
Good to get this on paper sometimes
 
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