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Night's Pallid Hush. . . (Thanks to Nan)

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Sven
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Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle grace
Casting its soft, delicate glow over my love's gentle face
The star's quiet candlelight fills the night sky
And whispering on night's gentle wind, that crystalline sigh

Hand caresses your face with the moonlight
Loving your smile and making your eyes sing with delight
The stars reflecting like diamonds in your eyes
Your gentle, caring, beauty lovelier than the open skies

Our lips meet in passions touching spirit
The beating of our hearts fills the night, can you hear it?
Our eyes meet in that one glance
So glad that on this night, we've gotten this one chance

Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle grace
Casting its soft, delicate glow over my love's gentle face
The star's quiet candlelight fills the night sky
And whispering on night's gentle wind, that crystalline sigh

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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Dear Sven, a most enchanting account of such a  magical encounter. Your words brought me directly into the moment of which you spoke, and it was lovely beyond any that I might conjure...

Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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2 posted 05-22-2000 06:55 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

So romantic...as ever Sven!  
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3 posted 05-22-2000 07:31 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
Just oh, so pretty.
~*Marge*~


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Sven, I'm totally honored that you liked this line... You've done a wonderful job with it - totally different from my sonnet.. That's awesome... I should feed you the lines one at a time and see what you come up with..  

Nah - I'll show you the sonnet now.. hehe..
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((Sigh))
Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle grace
Casting it's soft, delicate glow over my love's gentle face
The star's quiet candlelight fills the night sky
And whispering on night's gentle wind, that crystalline sigh

another ((sigh)) just beautiful Sven
Takes my breath away.
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


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6 posted 05-22-2000 03:30 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This was truly beautiful.  I loved the soft flow as the whole poem just seem to dance in the breeze.

Marina
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So romantic and beautiful it was almost mystical!!   I bow before the king yet again!!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
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you do have a way with words.it's a beautiful poem

 We are all poets, its just some people dont know it yet.
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Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle grace
Casting its soft, delicate glow over my love's gentle face
The star's quiet candlelight fills the night sky
And whispering on night's gentle wind, that crystalline sigh

Hand caresses your face with the moonlight
Loving your smile and making your eyes sing with delight
The stars reflecting like diamonds in your eyes
Your gentle, caring, beauty lovelier than the open skies
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Sven, this is exceptional and exquisite.
took my breath away...
you do that a lot ya know *smile*  
that must mean your a poet huh?
INDEED IT DOES!!!
wonderful writing my poetic pal.
later sweet-sven-gator
jm


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They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
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The world calls a butterfly"
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10 posted 05-22-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all so much for your replies. . . they mean a lot to me. . . and thanks again Nan for the line. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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