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the migration of the birds III

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rene
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0 posted 05-21-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rene

Dipped you into my eyes
and pulled you
Into my hallucanegenic heart
Will you remember my part?

The coming night
   turned
Summer cold

We were born to die
and so grew old

How will we speak
when we forget
how to talk

We were free
before
we could walk
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rene
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1 posted 05-22-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rene

ahh, my poor little friend, will anyone ever notice you?
brian madden
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2 posted 05-22-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Hi Rene, I am noticing and enjoying your series of poems the migration of the birds. Just wondering how many is there in the series. The only way to get noticed is to let people know you are here. People don't have time to read every poem so I suggest to comment as often as you can on poems you like.  Fantastic poem, hang on in there you have a great talent and will get noticed. Keep writing and keep commenting.
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