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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Jasmine Blowing ~*Marge Tindal*~ Jasmine blowing through my mind Fragrant from the honeyed vine ~*~ Wafting on breeze caressing nocturnal light Jasmine blowing essence of night ~*~ Clinging softly dew of the evening Through my senses Jasmine weaving ~*~ Jasmine blowing through my mind Another place Another time ~*~ Breathe me back to scenes so sweet Jasmine nights of loves' repeat ~*~ Jasmine blowing too soon gone Morning laces fragrant dawn ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Marge, I love the night blooming of Jasmine just outside our bedroom window..it is so exotic and sensual this night delight...I see you think so too. Beautiful poem! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
The light airy quality of an evening breeze. Somehow sitting on a latticed porch in a swing (not alone),under the moonlight, comes to mind as I read these wonderful words. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, this is delightful, lovely as the jasmine that blooms close to our pool in its season. Nothing quite like that smell or this poem!! Wonderful!! Love you, Marge! Love and hugs, Lizzie  < !signature-->"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." [This message has been edited by ESP (edited 05-21-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Evening breeze, Fragrant Jasmine, Scented airs, Promises nights so fine Jasmine blowing, Night's starry lights, Love blooming, Embracing love so tight... ........... Great poem Marge, loved each word... Regards, Sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Marge that was a breath of fresh poetry, I was wondering why forum 7 smelled so beautiful, I just followed the scent to your wonderful words. Here I brought some flowers, not that this place needs brighting up. Wafting on breeze caressing nocturnal light Jasmine blowing essence of night ~*~ Clinging softly dew of the evening Through my senses Jasmine weaving Breathe me back to scenes so sweet Jasmine nights of loves' repeat ~*~ Jasmine blowing too soon gone Morning laces fragrant dawn [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-21-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ I DO think so too ! Thank you my friend of fragrance wafting. Mike~ The 'latticed porch' of your reply brings lots of memories - just as the Jasmine does. Thank you. Lil' Lizzie~ I sometimes forget that my Spring is your Winter. I send you fragrant thoughts on winds of delight.  Sudhir~ Thank you for the fragrant reply. BrianM~ Yes, we are blessed with the fragrant flow of poetry ... Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Beautiful work Marge, for a minute there I could smell the jasmine as I read. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many pictures this weaves...well done, my friend... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Ahhhhh ! Thank you. Sunshine~ Thanks for 'seeing' the fragrant thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I think I can smell it here!!! Just elegant, my friend. It is amazing how we can smell a fragrance and be reminded of something from the past, isn't it? Great writing, as usual!! LW |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful, Marge! Stunningly elegant...such a romantic vision..I am in awe of you. *Krista Knutson* ~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Marge~ What a beautiful tale you weave with your words. This is an amazing piece, the flow and the images are perfect. Applause for Marge, queen of all poets! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Almost as beautiful as you are. *L* |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Well, what can I say after all these lovely replies...?  Beautiful poem...so soft and flowing. Loved this. Christina =^..^= |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
After reading your wonderful poem. It's so lively and flowing. I'm honored to have you reply to my poems thanx for sharing your talent. I look forward to reading more. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I'm glad to know you found it elegant. Thanks always for your comments. Krista~ What a very sweet thing for you to say. I'm just pleased knowing you like it. Melissa~ You are such a sweetheart to think so. I thank you. Seymour~ Now you've got me blushing. Love ya' BobbyCat~ Just knowing that the fragrance is recognized by so many others is a pleasure all it's own. Thank you, my friend. AngelWings~ Thank you, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Marge was just getting ready to shut down when I saw this. What lovely smell that you have portrayed. My favorite sister wears Jasmine perfume -) Wonderful romantic flowing poetry here, Marge. I really enjoyed it. Nite, ~netswan |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Jasmine is one of my favorite scents...just breathes romance and relaxation!!! I love this Marge!!! Ahhh...I remember some beautiful moments..ehem...Ok...I'll stop!! he he Love you!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NetSwan~ So pleased that the fragrance caught your fancy. Thank you for enjoying. Devina~ I just KNEW that Jasmine would be YOU. You know I'm pleased ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! Jasmine is one of my favorites! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you .. glad you enjoyed the fragrance. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This poem breaths your essence Beautiful, Marge Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my dear~ Thank you, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lily121 Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 24 |
Extrodinary! Love it. The most beaitiful I've ever heard so far in these 10 yrs of mine...wonderful. Just love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lily~ Thank you so very much for your kind reply. I am very pleased that you thought this was so lovely. So sweet of you to let me know. I welcome you again to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just on accounta' ... it's a Jasmine kinda day~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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