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Marge Tindal
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Jasmine Blowing
~*Marge Tindal*~

Jasmine blowing
through my mind
Fragrant from
the honeyed vine
~*~
Wafting on breeze
caressing nocturnal light
Jasmine blowing
essence of night
~*~
Clinging softly
dew of the evening
Through my senses
Jasmine weaving
~*~
Jasmine blowing
through my mind
Another place
Another time
~*~
Breathe me back
to scenes so sweet
Jasmine nights
of loves' repeat
~*~
Jasmine blowing
too soon gone
Morning laces
fragrant dawn






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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1 posted 05-21-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh Marge, I love the night blooming of Jasmine just outside our bedroom window..it is so exotic and sensual this night delight...I see you think so too.  Beautiful poem!
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2 posted 05-21-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

The light airy quality of an evening breeze.
Somehow sitting on a latticed porch in a swing (not alone),under the moonlight, comes to mind as I read these wonderful words.
ESP
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3 posted 05-21-2000 03:03 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Marge, this is delightful, lovely as the jasmine that blooms close to our pool in its season. Nothing quite like that smell or this poem!! Wonderful!! Love you, Marge!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie
  


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."




[This message has been edited by ESP (edited 05-21-2000).]
Sudhir Iyer
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Evening breeze,
Fragrant Jasmine,
Scented airs,
Promises nights so fine

Jasmine blowing,
Night's starry lights,
Love blooming,
Embracing love so tight...

...........

Great poem Marge, loved each word...

Regards,
Sudhir



 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
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5 posted 05-21-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Marge that was a breath of fresh poetry,
I was wondering why forum 7 smelled so beautiful, I just followed the scent to your wonderful words. Here I brought some flowers, not that this place needs brighting up.

Wafting on breeze
caressing nocturnal light
Jasmine blowing
essence of night
~*~
Clinging softly
dew of the evening
Through my senses
Jasmine weaving

Breathe me back
to scenes so sweet
Jasmine nights
of loves' repeat
~*~
Jasmine blowing
too soon gone
Morning laces
fragrant dawn


[This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-21-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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Martie~
I DO think so too !
Thank you my friend of fragrance wafting.

Mike~
The 'latticed porch' of your reply brings lots of memories - just as the Jasmine does.
Thank you.

Lil' Lizzie~
I sometimes forget that my Spring is your Winter.
I send you fragrant thoughts on winds of delight.

Sudhir~
Thank you for the fragrant reply.

BrianM~
Yes, we are blessed with the fragrant flow of poetry ...
Thank you.
~*Marge*~




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7 posted 05-22-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Beautiful work Marge, for a minute there I could smell the jasmine as I read.  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
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8 posted 05-22-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

So many pictures this weaves...well done, my friend...
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EagleOne~
Ahhhhh !  Thank you.

Sunshine~
Thanks for 'seeing' the fragrant thoughts.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge~
I think I can smell it here!!!  Just elegant, my friend.  It is amazing how we can smell a fragrance and be reminded of something from the past, isn't it?  Great writing, as usual!!  
LW
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Beautiful, Marge!  Stunningly elegant...such a romantic vision..I am in awe of you.  

 *Krista Knutson*

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~Marge~

What a beautiful tale you weave with your words. This is an amazing piece, the flow and the images are perfect.  Applause for Marge, queen of all poets!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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Marge,
Almost as beautiful as you are. *L*
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Well, what can I say after all these lovely replies...?     Beautiful poem...so soft and flowing.  Loved this.  

Christina =^..^=
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After reading your wonderful poem.  It's so lively and flowing.  I'm honored to have you reply to my poems thanx for sharing your talent. I look forward to reading more.
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LoneWolf~
I'm glad to know you found it elegant.
Thanks always for your comments.

Krista~
What a very sweet thing for you to say.
I'm just pleased knowing you like it.

Melissa~
You are such a sweetheart to think so.
I thank you.

Seymour~
Now you've got me blushing.
Love ya'

BobbyCat~
Just knowing that the fragrance is recognized by so many others is a pleasure all it's own.  Thank you, my friend.

AngelWings~
Thank you, hon.
~*Marge*~


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Marge was just getting ready to shut
down when I saw this.  What lovely
smell that you have portrayed.  My
favorite sister wears Jasmine perfume -)

Wonderful romantic flowing poetry here,
Marge.  I really enjoyed it.

Nite,  
~netswan
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Jasmine is one of my favorite scents...just breathes romance and relaxation!!! I love this Marge!!! Ahhh...I remember some beautiful moments..ehem...Ok...I'll stop!! he he
Love you!!!


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NetSwan~
So pleased that the fragrance caught your fancy.  Thank you for enjoying.

Devina~
I just KNEW that Jasmine would be YOU.
You know I'm pleased !  
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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Beautiful, Marge! Jasmine is one of my favorites!  

Denise
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Denise~
Thank you .. glad you enjoyed the fragrance.
~*Marge*~


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This poem breaths your essence
Beautiful, Marge
Liz
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Elizabeth, my dear~
Thank you, hon.
~*Marge*~


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Extrodinary! Love it. The most beaitiful I've ever heard so far in these 10 yrs of mine...wonderful. Just love it.
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