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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-05-21 02:28 PM


Could This Be Love?
Amy M. Kennedy

The feeling in my heart is so powerful and intense
When I am with you, I feel so free
My soul feels like it is new and has been cleansed
My mind never at such ease

Could this be love? this feeling that I feel
Is this God's divine plan...you are a true work of his art
The emotions capture me completely, they are so real
From your life I never want to part

Everyday the emotions become stronger
The words I love you seem just right
Losing my battle to fight, can't hold out much longer
In fact no longer wanting to fight

Your lips softly touch mine, as I speak your name
Our bodies dance together like the swaying of the trees
Now that I have you, I'll never be the same
Flames of heat engulf me, never wanting from your release

Could this be love? Do you feel it too
Surely its not my imagination, and this is no dream
I am completely happy when I think of you
Our love echoing thru the universe and shining like a moon beam

Reality has to be considered, that much I know
But everyday I am finding, I want you more
And it isn't just physical, our feelings continue to grow
When we are together, I feel like I can soar

It is night now, and in your arms I want to be
But you are so far away, I wonder if we'll ever be together
I only want to share a life with you, to love you completely
I know you feel the same, you whispered forever

Could this be love?

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 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-21-2000).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2000-05-21 02:35 PM


Amy girl, I think this must be love....and you are in it.  You have written your heart here and it sings so sweet!
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-05-21 04:51 PM


Me thinks you have answered your own question  

listen to your heart...
read this poem...
your heart and soul wrote it.
It says all the right things.

take care sweets
jm

Sven
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3 posted 2000-05-21 07:28 PM


Amy, I've gotta go with Jan on this one. . . you know your heart, you know the feelings that you have. . . sometimes, you just have to go for it. . . otherwise, you may never get the chance again. . .

Such a great poem, full of wonder and love. . . makes me smile. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
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