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Sven
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0 posted 05-21-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Dawn
First light
New day comes
Bringing joy and delight

Sun
Streaks through
Rays of warmth
Covering me and you

Kiss
Open arms
Here with you
Safe from all harm

Love
Gentle touch
Holding your heart
This means so much

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 05-21-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Just lovely Sven  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


serenity blaze
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2 posted 05-21-2000 02:14 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Tender and sveet, as always, me Sven....applauding you once again...
brian madden
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3 posted 05-21-2000 05:05 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Beautiful and gentle.

Dawn
First light
New day comes
Bringing joy and delight
Sun
Streaks through
Rays of warmth
Covering me and you

Kiss
Open arms
Here with you
Safe from all harm

Love
Gentle touch
Holding your heart
This means so much
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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "

Douglas Adams



[This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-21-2000).]
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 05-21-2000 05:20 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Such peaceful thoughts...lovely verse...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Poet deVine
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5 posted 05-21-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

What a way to wake up! Beautiful, Sir Sven.  
Nan
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6 posted 05-21-2000 09:34 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

My very favorite time of day, my friend....

Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle Grace..
Severn
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7 posted 05-21-2000 10:01 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Nicely done Sven!

K
Marina
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8 posted 05-21-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Could someone please pass me a kleenex?????

Marina
Dawn Eclipse
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9 posted 05-21-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Hey Sven!

That was a wonderful poem!  *Applauds*  I look forward to much more, and real soon!

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Aimster
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10 posted 05-21-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

sven--

your amazing talent continues to shine in this one. your work always makes me smile...thank you. and as always this was BEAUTIFUL!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Crystal Lynn
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11 posted 05-21-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for Crystal Lynn   Email Crystal Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal Lynn

great poem..simple words..yet i could see what you were writing as if i was there watching with you :]
Sven
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12 posted 05-21-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all my friends. . .

DA, always nice to hear from you, I do miss your replies. . .

serenity, thank you very much!!  *bowing*

brian, your re-format is interesting. . . thanks for the suggestion. . .

Claire, thank you, it's always nice to hear from you. . .

deVine, yes, it is a wonderful way to wake up. . .unless it's raining. . .

Nan, thanks... mine too, and is that a challenge phrase I see there?  Consider it done. . .

Severn, thank you so much. . .

Marina, here you go. . .would you like to keep the box?

Dawn, I would never be one to disappoint such a reuqest!!     Thank you. . .

Aimster, thank you. . . glad that I can bring something to your day!!  

Crystal, first, welcome my friend to Passions, and second, thank you so much for your reply. . . I'm glad that I could paint such a picture for you. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marina
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13 posted 05-21-2000 07:42 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Well. with your poetry lately, i am afraid I may be in need of more then one box.

Marina
Isis
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14 posted 05-22-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Aah if only my dawn's were that beautiful!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Sven
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15 posted 05-22-2000 10:30 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Marina, I have all the Kleenex you can imagine. . .

Isis, have you been looking at the same sunrises that I have?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Corinne
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16 posted 05-22-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Another lovely one, you are definitely on a roll!

Corinne
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17 posted 05-22-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sven,
Lovely, enjoyed the read.
tracie66
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Sven as usual your expression is tops 10/10
Lovely poem
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


vandana
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19 posted 06-04-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Beautiful poem.
Sven
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20 posted 06-05-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Wow, I missed some people here!!

Corinne, Sy, tracie, and vandana...thank you all!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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