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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-05-21 01:00 AM


Just look into my eyes,
and you will see,
a lady who loves you deeply
without a doubt.
If you look into my eyes
you will find my deepest thoughts
that seem to pierce through your heart.
The longing that I cannot seem to say in words
Just look into my eyes my lover
Look closely and you will see a ocean of passion
that only I share with you.
As our hearts beat as one.
Our eyes gleam together and form the color
of love.
ahhhhhh so enlightning, so persuasive,
If you only look into my eyes.
Just be my prisoner but for a day.
Let me entrance you with my eyes,
that speak all words
that my lips do not dare utter.
Lets fall deeply in love.
Watch my love grow even more each day.
Look into my eyes and you will see
the biggest smile for you from me.




 

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-05-21 05:03 AM


It is a Cliche, but there is truth in it, the eyes are windows to the soul. That was a beautiful poem, lovely emotions.

you will find my deepest thoughts
that seem to pierce through your heart.
The longing that I cannot seem to say in words
Just look into my eyes my lover
Look closely and you will see a ocean of passion
that only I share with you.
As our hearts beat as one.

Just be my prisoner but for a day.
Let me entrance you with my eyes,
that speak all words
that my lips do not dare utter.

really beautiful.
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Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-05-22 08:40 AM


Hi Rosebud,

Oh love isn't it wonderful, enjoyed the poem very much thank you for sharing.

Love,  Cerenity

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
3 posted 2000-05-22 09:23 AM


Rosebud...
   very passionate indeed! i loved this one...although i prefer dark poetry i enjoyed reading ur work...keep it up will u??

ashley

Lorraine Nisbet
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA
4 posted 2000-05-22 12:11 PM



Hello, Rosebud~

Wow, great!  I really like this.

~Lorraine

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