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My Eyes

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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 05-21-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Rosebud1229

Just look into my eyes,
and you will see,
a lady who loves you deeply
without a doubt.
If you look into my eyes
you will find my deepest thoughts
that seem to pierce through your heart.
The longing that I cannot seem to say in words
Just look into my eyes my lover
Look closely and you will see a ocean of passion
that only I share with you.
As our hearts beat as one.
Our eyes gleam together and form the color
of love.
ahhhhhh so enlightning, so persuasive,
If you only look into my eyes.
Just be my prisoner but for a day.
Let me entrance you with my eyes,
that speak all words
that my lips do not dare utter.
Lets fall deeply in love.
Watch my love grow even more each day.
Look into my eyes and you will see
the biggest smile for you from me.




 
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brian madden
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since 05-06-2000
Posts 4532
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1 posted 05-21-2000 05:03 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

It is a Cliche, but there is truth in it, the eyes are windows to the soul. That was a beautiful poem, lovely emotions.

you will find my deepest thoughts
that seem to pierce through your heart.
The longing that I cannot seem to say in words
Just look into my eyes my lover
Look closely and you will see a ocean of passion
that only I share with you.
As our hearts beat as one.

Just be my prisoner but for a day.
Let me entrance you with my eyes,
that speak all words
that my lips do not dare utter.

really beautiful.
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Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
Escondido-California


2 posted 05-22-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Rosebud,

Oh love isn't it wonderful, enjoyed the poem very much thank you for sharing.

Love,  Cerenity
starboards
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since 10-14-1999
Posts 469
longwood, florida


3 posted 05-22-2000 09:23 AM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Rosebud...
   very passionate indeed! i loved this one...although i prefer dark poetry i enjoyed reading ur work...keep it up will u??

ashley
Lorraine Nisbet
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since 05-18-2000
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4 posted 05-22-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Hello, Rosebud~

Wow, great!  I really like this.

~Lorraine
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