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Why me?.....

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Dark_kisses_Within
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0 posted 05-21-2000 12:45 AM       View Profile for Dark_kisses_Within   Email Dark_kisses_Within   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dark_kisses_Within's Home Page   View IP for Dark_kisses_Within

Running down the street
Trying to be set free
Of all the pain inside
That has become me
But why does it follow
And grasp onto my heals
No one understands me
Or see's the pain I feel
At times a simple hug
Could possibly do the trick
But yet I hit a wall
A wall made of bricks
So here I am today
Feeling as lousy as can be
With all the doubt and pity
Oh why do I have to be me?


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 05-21-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

A question we all ask ourselves at one time or another...this is very good.  
Rosebud1229
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2 posted 05-21-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

I loved you poem. It is so true. Your not alone . I myself have felt the same.

 
Dark Angel
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3 posted 05-21-2000 02:02 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh yes I too have felt this, wonderful poem
DKW  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


brian madden
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4 posted 05-21-2000 06:32 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

"No one understands me
Or see's the pain I feel
At times a simple hug
Could possibly do the trick
But yet I hit a wall"

We all feel this way at times during our life
but you must not let the pain take over.
very good poem.



 "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
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LadySofia
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5 posted 05-21-2000 07:38 AM       View Profile for LadySofia   Email LadySofia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit LadySofia's Home Page   View IP for LadySofia

Well-said! Sometimes a hug will suffice.... "squeeeze!"  

^_^ Amanda



 Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate, Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May, And summer's lease hath all too short a date. Sometimes too hot the eye of heaven shines, And often is his gold complexion dimmed; And every fair from fair sometimes declines, By chance or nature's changing course, untrimmed. But thy eternal summer shall not fade, Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st; Nor shall death brag thou wand'rest in his shade, When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st.
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
William Shakespeare

Sven
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6 posted 05-21-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

You are you because only you can know the things that you know. . . only you can learn from the things that happen to you and only you can make your life better. . . sounds strange, but that's why you're you. . .

This is an excellent poem, full of the questions that we all ask ourselves every day. . .

Well done. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

 
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