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Lone Ranger
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0 posted 05-20-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger


I love you so much, my love... don't sing
    The human heart with more truth...
    I love you as friend and as lover
    In a continuous and cruel reality.
    
    I love you kindred, of a calm useful love,
    And I love you beyond, present in the longing.
    I love you, finally, with great freedom
    Inside the eternity and in each instant.
    
    I love you as a bug, plainly,
    Of a love without mystery and without virtue  
    With a massive and permanent desire.
    
    And of loving you like this, too much and so often,
    It is that one day in your body suddenly  
    I shall die from loving more than I could.


 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
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serenity blaze
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"I shall die from loving more than I could."

A lovely ouch.  Touching in its sincerity.

very, very, nice...
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Thanks Serenity!!
Oh, and sincerity well that's my middle name...

 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society
 
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