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Lone Ranger
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0 posted 05-20-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger


Oh, God!
Please tell me
Help me understand why?
Why did the Heavens
Made such a beautiful girl
As the one I see everyday in a dream
Tell me how can she have
The most wonderful eyes
And yet I am unseen
She, who is the queen of my heart
She makes me smile
She makes me cry
She tears me apart
She who have already changed my life
For a long time she was the
Only reason that I lived
Every little thing I did
Somehow was related to her
I don't know what she wants
She seems to be toying with me
Like she's playing with my heart
I've tried
Tried to comprehend the things she do
But it figures out that I'm nothing but a fool
A fool whose only reason to live
Was love
And now he is asking to the lord above
To help him understand why...


 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
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brian madden
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1 posted 05-21-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

LOve can be an intoxicating thing, making a person loss reason. I can relate to where you are coming from. Just be weary, listen to your soul and your instinct but not your heart. Take care.

a very good poem.

She who have already changed my life
For a long time she was the
Only reason that I lived
Every little thing I did
Somehow was related to her
I don't know what she wants
She seems to be toying with me
Like she's playing with my heart
  
Lone Ranger
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Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil


2 posted 05-23-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

Listen to my instincts...
that's something that i'v been trying to achieve in the last couple of weeks, but you know, when love runs deep into your veins it's kind of hard to listen to anything but your heart...

 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society
spiked
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 886
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3 posted 05-23-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

There is no hurt deeper than to love one who does not love you back.
There is no easy way to fix your heart just go on till it is mended by another.
Very nice
Rich
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4 posted 05-23-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

Lone Ranger maybe one day she will see the love in your eyes shining back on her. Reflections to tend to bounce back. In love there is always hope, Remember it is better to have loved than to never have loved at all. This was a very good poem hope to read more. Poetry is the window to our souls. Sometimes it helps take away some of the deep pain that is buried so deep within. Sometimes it even lets us figure out who we truly are.

 
Lone Ranger
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5 posted 05-23-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

thanks rosebud and spiked, be sure that I'm taking notes on every advise you guys are giving me, and rosebud your reply was just great tehnk you very much!

 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society
CocoBaci
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6 posted 05-23-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Ranger, these verses are so powerful and the emotions expressed inked on screen here are just incredible.
CocoBaci
 
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