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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Oh, God! Please tell me Help me understand why? Why did the Heavens Made such a beautiful girl As the one I see everyday in a dream Tell me how can she have The most wonderful eyes And yet I am unseen She, who is the queen of my heart She makes me smile She makes me cry She tears me apart She who have already changed my life For a long time she was the Only reason that I lived Every little thing I did Somehow was related to her I don't know what she wants She seems to be toying with me Like she's playing with my heart I've tried Tried to comprehend the things she do But it figures out that I'm nothing but a fool A fool whose only reason to live Was love And now he is asking to the lord above To help him understand why... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
LOve can be an intoxicating thing, making a person loss reason. I can relate to where you are coming from. Just be weary, listen to your soul and your instinct but not your heart. Take care. a very good poem. She who have already changed my life For a long time she was the Only reason that I lived Every little thing I did Somehow was related to her I don't know what she wants She seems to be toying with me Like she's playing with my heart |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Listen to my instincts... that's something that i'v been trying to achieve in the last couple of weeks, but you know, when love runs deep into your veins it's kind of hard to listen to anything but your heart... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
There is no hurt deeper than to love one who does not love you back. There is no easy way to fix your heart just go on till it is mended by another. Very nice Rich |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Lone Ranger maybe one day she will see the love in your eyes shining back on her. Reflections to tend to bounce back. In love there is always hope, Remember it is better to have loved than to never have loved at all. This was a very good poem hope to read more. Poetry is the window to our souls. Sometimes it helps take away some of the deep pain that is buried so deep within. Sometimes it even lets us figure out who we truly are. |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
thanks rosebud and spiked, be sure that I'm taking notes on every advise you guys are giving me, and rosebud your reply was just great tehnk you very much! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ranger, these verses are so powerful and the emotions expressed inked on screen here are just incredible. CocoBaci |
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