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the migration of the birds II

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rene
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0 posted 05-20-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rene

into the perimiter,
swallows flew
                         the marshes concealed by whispering reeds

they were thrown
leaping like children
                         lost in thoughts of far away lands
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I hope there is a triolgy. beautiful and haunting image.
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its more than a trilogy, part one is somewhere back there
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