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Aimster
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0 posted 05-20-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

time to move on
amy m kennedy

days of yesterday are long gone
its time to move on
time keeps ticking, another day passes
its time to move on

fond memories of the past
the good times will always last
new doors opening, a new beginning for me
the best is yet to come, that i believe

another day passes as the sun sets low
its time to move on
no need to look back at what ifs and should haves
as its time to move on

cherish each day, is what i try to do
another chapter of my life comes to a sweet close
i am not sad that yesterday is not here
for tomorrow holds something dear

its time to move on.


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-20-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

Hi there,
I am no expert, but this reads so well, you ever thought of making this into a song?
It just rolls off yur thoughts so easily!!
A.
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2 posted 05-20-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wisdom in poetic form...very good Amy.  
Michael
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3 posted 05-20-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

There is a sense of sadness in this but your words are so true - "tomorrow holds something dear".  Always look ahead, Amy, there is much to look forward to.

Michael
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4 posted 05-20-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Wise words, I always believe that you not live in the past only the present.

"cherish each day, is what i try to do
another chapter of my life comes to a sweet close
i am not sad that yesterday is not here
for tomorrow holds something dear"

A lovely image, a fantastic poem, flows wonderfully.
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5 posted 05-20-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

It's time to move on...
If only this words could get in my mind...
Great poem, really like your style...

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It was always thus and always thus will be"
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Amy~
You are moving on and have much awaiting you.
You will tackle life with an attitude that puts others at ease.
May all of your tomorrows be filled with hopes, desires and goals of successful attainment.
Love you, young lady.
~*Marge*~


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PERFECT SUNSHINE!!!
and your tomorrows are gonna be awesome...
hit the ground running Amy-girl...
the skys the limit with your positive outlook.
great writing here.
me loves ya!
jm


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


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8 posted 05-21-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

thanks so much you guys for your sweet and encouraging replies. i wrote this when i was feeling kinda sad and happy at the same time. its a bit of a confusing time in my life as a major part of my life has closed (my formal education). what lies ahead of me is both scary and exciting at the same time. i am also growing as a person in many ways and all the challenges are somewhat overwhelming. i am forever grateful that i can put all my emotions to paper and that i have such wonderful, talented, and compassionate people to share it with. you all make up the best of the best!!

all my love,
amy


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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