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A Romantic Heart
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0 posted 05-20-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I am his muse, his words,
how they flow from his pen,
To thy hand,
Creating me, his love,
as a poet to poetry,
A painter with a canvas,
Inside his words are the protraits
of my heart, drawing each outline of my being,
with every word expressed or written,
I am the dancer to his dance,
The singer to his song,
He stares in his trance, looking at me all day long,
Unto his sheet of paper I find,
How his quill, his pen, his hand,
Has touched mine,
Without the skin,
But beautiful words,
Such words I breathe in,
I hold his words up to my chest,
Close to my heart,
I feel his passion for me,
His love, his heart,
Beating as a drum,
He listens...
He begins to write,
Slow and then faster,
A passionate dancer,
Gazing at me with his joyous smile,
He looks, closes his eyes and writes his style,
He writes about my red lips, my long silky hair,
My gifts, my passion, my love, the way I care,
In awe I am,
So tenderly drawn out, so beautifully displayed,
Carved by his hands, his words, his poetry,
This is his view of me, I am his creation,
His inspiration,
I am now the poet, he is now MY muse...




[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 05-22-2000).]
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brian madden
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1 posted 05-20-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

That was beautiful, "His inspiration,
I am now the poet, he is now MY muse"
a wonderful poem.
Balladeer
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2 posted 05-20-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Romantic one, you could be anyone's muse. How lucky a man would be to be yours. Very nicely done..........
Lorraine Nisbet
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3 posted 05-20-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet

i am going through that right now.
the tables have turned. now he says how is he ever to catch up?  does this sound like a contest?  what to do?

~Lorraine~
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 05-20-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

RH,

Whoever he is, he is one lucky guy!!  Wow!!  Great writing, my friend.  

LW


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5 posted 05-20-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Romantic Heart,
    I loved this! It seemed so very real, it was breathtaking. Wonderful!
              David2
Sven
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6 posted 05-20-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent poem!!

An interesting situation, what happens when the poet becomes the muse?  Wonderfully handled!!!

Very good. . .

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JamesMichael
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7 posted 05-21-2000 08:46 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"He writes about my red lips..my long silky hair..My gifts, my passion, my Love, the way I care.
In awe of him, So tenderly drawn out, so beautifully displayed.
Carved by his hands, his words, his poetry.
This is his view of me, I am his creation, his inspiration."
Romantic these particular lines are the most beautiful poetry I have ever read...it flows so beautifully and gracefully and best of all these lines are warm and tender.   James
A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 05-22-2000 06:13 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Brian...Thank you, most gracious I am for thy sweet reply of beautiful  

Michael...I am flattered and in awe of your words, they encourage me, any woaman would be blessed to have you as her poet..  

Lor...I know, I have a few secret muse's on Passions who inspire me from their poetry, which creates a better poet in me.  

Lone...hey, my friend, we both know I have a favorite muse   Your friendship means alot to me  

David..It is real, written from the heart, about ??? my mystery muse, whoever he is? Thank you David I am touched by your reply  

Sven...It is intrigueing isn't it, like a fire, a fuel, feeding off of anothers passion, when someone writes about me, it inspires me to write about them...thanks for wonderful compliments  

James..you sure know how to make a poets heart melt, I am blushing at such honorable words of kindness   thank You   Your reply was warm and tender to my heart





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Parker
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9 posted 05-22-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

A Romantic Heart, yes indeedy, writing about red lips, and long silky hair.... and your gifts? and your passion,   yes I would like more info on that.  
This is a wonderful poem and a little elusive, layered with sweet secrets... Like chocolate, sweet and creamy that melts on your tongue, a taste that begs for more.  

Parker
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10 posted 05-23-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very beautiful, RH!

Denise
A Romantic Heart
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11 posted 05-24-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Parker...All you have to do is ask? Or shall I display my chocolate in poetry form in reply to your question?

Denise...Thanks your a beautiful poet and friend!
Danny Holloway
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12 posted 05-24-2000 11:21 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Incredible inspiration....like none other!
~~excellent writing~~RM


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Corazon
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13 posted 05-24-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

wow, just loved this, I have always wished for a poet "love" to write about me...and now...lol...after reading this I want it even more!  
A Romantic Heart
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14 posted 05-25-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Danny your the man! Thanks for your tender sweet words, sir Halloway!

Cor..Yes me too...love to have SOMEONE write poetry about me..I am still having lingering effects from Balladers Poem in open 6...I'll never get over that one..whew!!
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