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The Exorcist

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-20-2000 03:46 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Where are the words
when needed?
(don't wanna feel like this...)
ink like blood
my  vein, the stem,
my pen, the exorcist.
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 05-20-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Poetry is a wonderful way to ease pain and erase demons, well said....great poem.
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-20-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Now WE ARE REALLY getting scary...
oh me twin...you wrote me in this.
you know...I know...OH NO!! *smile*
me muse is still off somewhere licking her wounds...
(see, i say me muse lives inside of me)
I know most have a muse of inspiration from an outside source, but you know me,
gotta be different.
my muse is like my gemini twin.
(did you ask me all this) NOT LOL
*sigh* sucks dont it.
we will have to inspire each other and do some serious EXORSIZING...ya know...
*kiss kiss*  
jm


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Sven
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3 posted 05-21-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

wow. . . we do reveal sometimes too much in our words don't we serenity?

Great poem. . .hope everything's ok. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Rosebud1229
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4 posted 05-21-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

very good, so often we do write to erase those demons that seem to lurk in our very existence. I do believe my next writing will be kind of a exorcism.. for whomever needs to be free.. of the exorcist! Nice to meet you.
insect
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5 posted 05-21-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

You got my head spinning with this one!
Denise
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6 posted 05-21-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I can totally relate, Serenity! Very good!

Denise
serenity blaze
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7 posted 05-21-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thanks to all with much gratitude for tolerating my dark moods of late---sifting through the memory archive again--sort of "defrag" for the soul, y'know?  Much grats, again.
Severn
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8 posted 05-21-2000 07:04 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Defrag of the soul - I like that!

Serenity...this is a great little poem - sometimes the short ones have the most power.

K
spiked
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9 posted 05-22-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

I have felt this exorcism you speak of.
you have struck the nail on the head.
Great short poem
Rich
 
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