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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-05-20 03:46 PM


Where are the words
when needed?
(don't wanna feel like this...)
ink like blood
my  vein, the stem,
my pen, the exorcist.

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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ireland
1 posted 2000-05-20 03:54 PM


Poetry is a wonderful way to ease pain and erase demons, well said....great poem.
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-05-20 05:20 PM


Now WE ARE REALLY getting scary...
oh me twin...you wrote me in this.
you know...I know...OH NO!! *smile*
me muse is still off somewhere licking her wounds...
(see, i say me muse lives inside of me)
I know most have a muse of inspiration from an outside source, but you know me,
gotta be different.
my muse is like my gemini twin.
(did you ask me all this) NOT LOL
*sigh* sucks dont it.
we will have to inspire each other and do some serious EXORSIZING...ya know...
*kiss kiss*  
jm


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~



Sven
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3 posted 2000-05-21 12:18 PM


wow. . . we do reveal sometimes too much in our words don't we serenity?

Great poem. . .hope everything's ok. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2000-05-21 01:13 AM


very good, so often we do write to erase those demons that seem to lurk in our very existence. I do believe my next writing will be kind of a exorcism.. for whomever needs to be free.. of the exorcist! Nice to meet you.
insect
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5 posted 2000-05-21 02:03 AM


You got my head spinning with this one!
Denise
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6 posted 2000-05-21 12:05 PM


I can totally relate, Serenity! Very good!

Denise

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-05-21 03:32 PM


Thanks to all with much gratitude for tolerating my dark moods of late---sifting through the memory archive again--sort of "defrag" for the soul, y'know?  Much grats, again.
Severn
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8 posted 2000-05-21 07:04 PM


Defrag of the soul - I like that!

Serenity...this is a great little poem - sometimes the short ones have the most power.

K

spiked
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Hammond, La USA
9 posted 2000-05-22 01:05 AM


I have felt this exorcism you speak of.
you have struck the nail on the head.
Great short poem
Rich

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