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Me,Myself and I

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Ardonida
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since 05-18-2000
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0 posted 05-19-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

Well, here is my 1st attempt at prose. I know nutting about it, but I read some of everyone elses stuff, and here is a 1st try. Does repetition count as wrong?? I would love to know.

You often say you know me,
but let me tell you myself,
no one knows me like I.

You generally thin you see me,
but might I inform you myself,
You see what is chosen by only I.

You firmly believe you hear me,
but let me disagree myself,
you only hear what this one is saying, I.

My, myself and I,
can you tell the differance>
me is who you think I am,
chosen so by myself.
And yet, you see only one person,
maybe yu should think upon that thought.

A.
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WolfsMate
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since 01-14-2000
Posts 122
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1 posted 05-19-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

It's more of a poem then prose. Other than a few spelling mistakes, I enjoyed it. Hope to see more from you.  

 "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near"
Ardonida
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2 posted 05-20-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

oy!! spelling has never been a strong point of mine!..
but thank you, let me have another try at it.
A.
Dusk Treader
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3 posted 05-20-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

WolfsMate is right, this is more of a poem than prose so I'll be moving it to Open for you.  If you have any questions email me.
 
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