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Untill there was you

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vandana
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Untill there was you,
filled my heart
with happiness,
Untill there was you,
you made me to love you,
you showed me
how much there is a love for me,
Untill there was you,
you taught
how to stand
and face the world alone,
when you're not around with me,
Untill there was you ,
There were times,
you showed me world,
The world with love and tenderness,
Untill there was you,
I was happy ,
Now you're gone away,
I can't believe
you're not here to hold me,
Untill there was you,
There was everthing,
Untill there was you,
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Sven
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1 posted 05-20-2000 12:33 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

vandana my friend, this poem just aches with longing and sadness. . . truly speaks to the feelings that we get when someone we love leaves. . .

an excellent poem. . .

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Your poem has touched my heart
CocoBaci
Sudhir Iyer
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Until there was you,
There was everthing,
Until there was you...


Beautifully expressed, Vandana. How sad one feels when someone close leaves ...

Regards,
Sudhir




 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
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4 posted 05-20-2000 01:04 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

VanDana~
Sweet longing sentiments.
You okay ?
Love ya, gal.
~*Marge*~


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brian madden
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vandana, I have to agree with everyone's comments, you poem echoes heartache and loss
That last three lines especially...
Until there was you,
There was everthing,
Until there was you...
Aimster
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6 posted 05-20-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

vendana--

oh girl how i can relate this this one, sadly. this was a beautiful expression of your feelings tinged with much sadness and longing! but still beautifully written. keep writing hon, it does help us heal  

take care,
amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
 
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