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My Lost love..(repost)

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Lonelypoet
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  I've finally lost her,
there's no tomorrow for us,
there's only darkness now.
I will forever miss you,
I haven't said good-bye nor
shall I.
I will hold the bitterness
within like always.
I was never able to say I love
you because you've changed.
  Good-bye...my love...

(a repost from Dark Passions)
© Copyright 2000 Chris - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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1 posted 05-20-2000 12:51 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

This poem just seems to bring out the emotions you think have been put away.   The verse that I found most captivating is .. I was never able to say I love you because you have changed ..

Thanks for the great reading
CocoBaci
vandana
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2 posted 05-20-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice poem.I like it very much.
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 05-20-2000 05:51 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This poem speaks to me as if I know you, you know me, I guess for now your still a mystery...

I know what you felt when writing this...great poem!
 
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