Member Rara Avis
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
Brilliant work, Brian, nice setting and appropriate words...
Penance for pretty boys,
Cleansed souls, murderers
Addicts of blood spill.
Spill blood of addicts
Murders, souls cleansed
Boys pretty of penance
only one word amiss for <-> of, but that was necessary to be placed like that, I guess.
Exceptional talent you have friend,
Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.