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Sable Scents

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Marge Tindal
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Sable Scents
~*Marge Tindal*~

On sable scents
of love's relent
the echo is resound
wafting on anguished breath of air
a new love has been found

Sent across night's canyon
the wail of heart-in-aching
found the breast of another
in which to stir awakening

The sable hue of broken heart
has reached another soul this night
boomeranging love my way
as if by designing light

On sable scents
of love's relent
screamed out to the sky
found a heart to light within
for another heard my plaintive cry

On rush of breeze
sent back to me
refreshing love now stands
within a heart now cradled
in another's tender hands





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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LadySofia
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1 posted 05-20-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for LadySofia   Email LadySofia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit LadySofia's Home Page   View IP for LadySofia

Sensual and sad...wonderful verse!

^_^ ladySofia


 That time of year thou mayst in me behold, When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang, Upon those boughs which shake against the cold, Bare ruined choirs where late the sweet birds sang. In me thou see'st the twilight of such day, As after sunset fadeth in the west, Which by-and-by black night doth take away, Death's second self that seals up all in rest. In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, That on the ashes of his youth doth lie, As the deathbed whereon it must expire, Consumed with that which it was nourished by. This thou perciev'st, which makes thy love more strong, To love that well which thou must leave ere long.
William Shakespeare


Danny Holloway
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2 posted 05-20-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Another touching poem from the high princess of poetry! My score card reads "10"
~~very nice and uplifting~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Marge Tindal
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LadySofia~
Thanks for your thoughts.

Danny~
Awwww !  You are a sweetie.
Thank you, 'Judge' Holloway !  
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 05-20-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Marge,...you have such a beautiful heart and you express it so wonderfully.  I enjoy all that you produce.
Martie
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Oh, I like this..there is something wild in it...could that be you?  Lovely writing!!
Marge Tindal
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SpitFire~
Your compliments are so sincerely written.
You delight my senses.  Thank you.

Martie~
Oh, yeah ... WILD ... that's me ! ! !

Love you ...
see you in the 'jungle of life'.  ~*Jane*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
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I see im not the only one having too much caffeine LOL
hey jane...
this poem is excellent and flows like butter
wonderful writing.
later-junlge woman-gator LOL
jm

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


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8 posted 05-20-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Marge~
You have expressed this well my friend and I enjoyed the read of many mixed emotions stirred within this  
Tracie~

 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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State of constant confusion!


9 posted 05-21-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Loved It!!!


 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep






[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 05-21-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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JanetMarie~
No such thing as too much caffeine at this house !  
Thank you for enjoying this one.

Tracie~
Thanks again, my little friend.
Glad to have stirred you.

Jeffrey~
I BELIEVE YOU !

Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

brian madden
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Marge, that was wonderful

"wafting on anguished breath of air
a new love has been found"

"Sent across night's canyon
the wail of heart-in-aching"

"boomeranging love my way
as if by designing light"

"On rush of breeze
sent back to me
refreshing love now stands
within a heart now cradled
in another's tender hands"

magical images, I am gald that you turned a negative situation positive.
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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "

Douglas Adams


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Very lovely, Marge!

Denise
Marge Tindal
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BrianM~
Thank you for your thoughts.
I'm always pleased to know that it touched you.

Denise~
Just knowing you're out there is
enough to brighten the day.
Thank you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Floating gently on a cloud....


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Marge, I'm back! My email is playing up but when it is working again I will send you the email I wrote you as soon as I did get back! This poem is beautiful! I didn't find it sad, just immensely touching. Thank you for sharing your beautiful words with us. You really are queen of all poets! Love ya Marge!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Marge Tindal
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Lil' Lizzie~
Hey, little one .. tried to e-mail you TWICE this morning ...both came back ... so let me know when you're up and running.
Thank you for popping in and for liking this, I agree ... not sad at all ... a glimmer of hope for all who are searching.
Love you ...
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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