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Your Heart. . .

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Sven
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0 posted 05-20-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

My love I know your heart
I know it's ins and outs
          each and every part
I know that beneath the pain
Beats the heart of a woman
          wishing to live again

I've known since we met love
Since that day you came to me
          an angel from above
You came, a heart to heal
And I showed you a love
          a love so real

Your heart my love I return
For you and for your love
          I will always yearn
Always my love will I see
The gentle heart of a woman
          who longs to be free

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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1 posted 05-20-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Soft and sweet and loving.  

Corinne
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 05-20-2000 07:34 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Romantic and devotional...

Great work, Sven as always...

Regards,
Sudhir

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
lorilockheart
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3 posted 05-20-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

I just love you Sven!  You are such a romantic and a true gentleman.  The lady in your life is so lucky.

Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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Marge Tindal
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4 posted 05-20-2000 09:19 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
Your tender heart exudes such romanticism -
*sighs* of delight with every read.
~*Marge*~


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CocoBaci
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5 posted 05-20-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

You simply are a jewel of a poet
.. written so eloquently ..

Always a pleasure to read your verses
CocoBaci
MagnoliaBlue
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6 posted 05-20-2000 01:24 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

This is so sweet.
Very touching and romantic.

Lucky Lady. Lucky Sven.
Good luck guys!

Hang on gently!

MBlue

 
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7 posted 05-20-2000 01:29 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Sven~

Another wonderful poem!  It was so beautiful.  Keep up your wonderful writing

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Marina
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8 posted 05-20-2000 01:33 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Lately, your words never cease to amaze me.
Wonderful writing Sven.

Marina
SpitFire
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9 posted 05-20-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Sven,...you never cease to amaze me with your work...truly wonderful.
JamesMichael
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10 posted 05-20-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Sven this is written with compassion and love.   James
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11 posted 05-20-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

sven--

beautiful, simply beautiful! u wow me with your amazing ability to write with such passion and love! u go boy!! lol. in all seriousness this was very lovely.

take care,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Lone Wolf
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12 posted 05-20-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

This was superb, Sven.  Sweetness, romance, and a little sadness there all in one.  I think this is one if your best, my friend.

Excellent writing...

  
Sven
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13 posted 05-21-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Wow, thank you all so much. . .

You always amaze ME with the warmth and richness of all of your replies. . .I am truly honored to enjoyed by so wonderful a group. . .

Thank you all again. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

tracie66
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14 posted 05-21-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sven so romantic and tenderly written, I sigh as I read.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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15 posted 05-21-2000 02:26 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sing to me, Sveetie...I'll hum the parts I don't know...lovely, lovely, you...thanks.
Isis
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16 posted 05-22-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So beautiful Sven, what woman could resist?  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Sven
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17 posted 05-22-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Tracie, serenity, and Isis... thank you my friends for your wonderful replies. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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