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phillipk
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since 2000-05-19
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0 posted 2000-05-19 09:00 PM


I've insulted your medium to the max.
Under the seat of your prose, I've set tacks.
The way you look at me, you probably see anthrax.
So I might as well wax you with a stick, little kid.
I'm sorry, but those are the workings of my id.

signed,
phillipk

© Copyright 2000 phillipk - All Rights Reserved
Poertree
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359
UK
1 posted 2000-05-22 05:42 PM


er ....... yes ... interesting

P

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-05-22 06:01 PM


Yes very interesting, I liked this and I don't think you have insulted poetry at all.


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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

Small Black Flowers That Grow In The Sky

"You have your very own number
They dress your cage in its nature
Once you roared now you just grunt lame
Pace around pathetic pound games

Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround
To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks
Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick
For the outside,
The small black flowers that grow in the sky

They drag sticks along your walls
Harvest your ovaries dead mothers crawl
Here comes warden, Christ, temple, elder
Environment not yours you see through it all

Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround
To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks
Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick
For the outside,
The small black flowers that grow in the sky

Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards


netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
3 posted 2000-05-23 02:15 AM


Oh, my yes, Phillip, that naughty id!

~netswan

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