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What Does Gina Want? Not me.

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 05-19-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

What does Gina Want?

I want to Love you forever.
We could spend endless hours together
enjoying every moment of pleasure.

I want to kiss passion filled lips
as I feel the curves I admire
within my anxious fingertips.

I want to spend every evening together
especially since I like you more than all others.
Its nice to have someone so sexy and revealing
to awaken all my desires and feelings.

I want a relationship that is real
full of hugs and kisses I can feel.
Your hair, your face, and your body
seem to be so warm an surreal.

I want to sleep with our legs interwoven together.
Oh how I desire to spend each night in your arms
feeling the magic of every slice of your feminine charms.
Awakening refreshed each morning again
to start all over where passion begins.
To touch and  feel each and every curve
as your precious body calms all of my nerves.

Then all of a sudden this thought came to my mind..
and I find myself saying...What does Gina want?

Jameslee@May19,2000
originallyOctober19,1994
Shedidn'twantme
Iwasnotherideal
Notasoulmate


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Severn
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1 posted 05-19-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is...astonishing in its forthright misery. The imagery is not in itself of loss - but it just underlies it...the loss is pervasive. I think you have done so well on this...



yes, sadly well done.

lorilockheart
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2 posted 05-20-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

I can almost see hopes being dashed and dreams being broken.  This is full of a sad tone, but such good, expressive writing.

Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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CocoBaci
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3 posted 05-20-2000 01:32 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Ohhh, this one you've shared is quite amazing and I found it most captivating right till the end verse where one is left pondering .. what does the other want

CocoBaci
Marina
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4 posted 05-20-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Oh James,  
I am so sorry to read this( I mean I loved the poem)but I was hoping things would work out.


Hugs,
Marina
Mistikman
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5 posted 05-20-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

This poem is so great, yet so very sad   I hope the situation improves somehow, I hate to see you in such a bad place.
SpitFire
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6 posted 05-20-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Excuse me sir,..if I don't say so myself,...this is an astounding expression....great writing. Thanks for sharing.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 05-21-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Severn, Lori, Coco, Marina, Mistikman, and Spitfire for your nice comments.  It's sad but true I fell madly in Love with Gina and her final answer was "I'm not in Love with you."  A five year relationship that has gone bad.  It is no longer Gina and James...it is Gina and Loyd..her guitar instructor.
Marina I want to clear this up for you...all the names sound alike.  Tina is my waitress friend who recently was married.  Gina was much more to me but will now be much less.  Lena is less but hopefully she will soon be much more in my life.
At one time I wanted to get back together with Gina..but now I only want her to leave me alone...when the phone rings I hope it is not her....I want to go on with my life and she is not in my plans, my hopes, and my dreams.     James
 
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