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What Is Left Unsaid

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Nicole
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0 posted 05-19-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

A smile I hear
in words
Spoken softly
in warm
breaths (I feel them, here)
and simple
     sighs - content to

h o v e r

between us
And I smile to hear
the laugh
        voice
in quiet contemplative
amusement
  pondering
the thoughts of
     why
and here
and there
and       you

when
I ~ amazed
would
  give breath
to hear
  ~murmured~
my
  name by
you
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1 posted 05-19-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

Satiate,
This is so amazing...There is just something special about hearing your name spoken by a loved one, even if you are content with evertything else...
A.
Christopher
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...

Amazed.

Yep, that's a good description.

Breathtaking's another one. This is so alive Nic! It breathes you in every line.

Sigh.
tracie66
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I breathe a sigh, this was very breathtaking and flowed beautifully. A lovely read  
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


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Satiate~
What a lovely poem.
Thoughts from the heart.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 05-20-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Exquisite, breathtaking, romantic...

What we all love.

Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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