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What Is Left Unsaid |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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A smile I hear in words Spoken softly in warm breaths (I feel them, here) and simple sighs - content to h o v e r between us And I smile to hear the laugh voice in quiet contemplative amusement pondering the thoughts of why and here and there and you when I ~ amazed would give breath to hear ~murmured~ my name by you |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
Satiate, This is so amazing...There is just something special about hearing your name spoken by a loved one, even if you are content with evertything else... A. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
... Amazed. Yep, that's a good description. Breathtaking's another one. This is so alive Nic! It breathes you in every line. Sigh.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I breathe a sigh, this was very breathtaking and flowed beautifully. A lovely read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Satiate~ What a lovely poem. Thoughts from the heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Exquisite, breathtaking, romantic... What we all love. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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