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RAM
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0 posted 05-19-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RAM

Mantra Transformed

Pulling you in
with each deep breath.
Slowly, I release
a sigh -
a sigh that is your name.

Feeling you flow
with each fresh pulse.
Softly, I whisper
in peace -
the peace that is your name.

Freely you stream
through each blessed cell.
Swiftly, I succumb
to rush -
a rush that lives your name...
Corinne.

  RAM  5/17/00

© Copyright 2000 RAM - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 05-19-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

That was beautiful, very tranquil. I am sure Corinne will be honoured by your mantra.
Parker
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2 posted 05-19-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Yepr! I echo brian totally. Beautifully penned.

Parker
Corinne
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state of confusion


3 posted 05-19-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Oh, RAM, I'm speechless. Thank you
(blushing furiously).

Corinne
dhuron
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4 posted 05-19-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

this was a wonderful poem..very peaceful and breathtaking...
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5 posted 05-20-2000 07:10 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

RAM~
Tee - Hee  
The *blush* becomes her, does it not?
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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LadySofia
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RAM my friend, what a compelling piece. Gives me shivers all over!

^_^ LadySofia


 That time of year thou mayst in me behold, When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang, Upon those boughs which shake against the cold, Bare ruined choirs where late the sweet birds sang. In me thou see'st the twilight of such day, As after sunset fadeth in the west, Which by-and-by black night doth take away, Death's second self that seals up all in rest. In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, That on the ashes of his youth doth lie, As the deathbed whereon it must expire, Consumed with that which it was nourished by. This thou perciev'st, which makes thy love more strong, To love that well which thou must leave ere long.
William Shakespeare


RAM
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7 posted 05-24-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

thank you brian and Parker

de nada, Corinne. thank YOU

thanks, dhuron

Marge, that it does.  

Thanks, LadySofia.  shivers are good, especially when it's near 100 outside.

Rick
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8 posted 05-24-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~RAM,...oh what a lovely piece.  You have the power to express so beautifully.  Thank you for sharing. *Peace.
RAM
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9 posted 05-25-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

thanks, Spitfire
 
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