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Inbetween the lines

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Master
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0 posted 05-19-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I planted stars, which FELL into my garden
IN fields of dreams, i searched for LOVE
AND I KEPT hope when faith has parted
and walked ON muddy roads that led above
and FALLING from the clouds onto pines
i wrote my story in-between the lines



 "I will not whole die, my soul in sacred lyre,
will outlive my dust and will escape decay,
And in the moonlit sphere, my glory will not tire
As long as poets still remain" A. Pushkin


© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 05-19-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good, Master! I love it! Just watch out for those landings!  

Denise
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2 posted 05-19-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Truely, inbetween the lines...well done!
Ardonida
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3 posted 05-19-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

Dear sir...
NOW I know why you are a MASTER....
It is so easy to read between the lines when there is nothing to see, but when it is right there in front of you, you kinda dont wanne see it...
It is such a lovely piece!!
Adri
Corinne
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4 posted 05-19-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Excellent poem!

Most excellent!

Corinne
 
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