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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-05-19 09:25 AM


Sun’s Lines

Take thou the slender line
of written word, all feather soft
and cool of night air,
brush your love-line
against my cheek,
aged by time
but young at heart

and do not allow the passage
of time to detain you
from passing thought of
ageless love in any form
from you
on to a greater being

for the Son encompasses the
sun and moon and stars
and remains all that
is holy
and
right.

Take thou thy slender line
of written word
to embrace the
Son.

19 May 2000
©KRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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1 posted 2000-05-19 10:58 AM


Simply beautiful, Sun .....
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-05-19 12:02 PM


I will, Karilea, take the slender line....

Beautiful as ever, words falling as beautiful petals...
Regards, sudhir

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-05-19 05:04 PM


Pepper, Sudhir...thank you both...very much...
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