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hippie_teen
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0 posted 05-19-2000 07:58 AM       View Profile for hippie_teen   Email hippie_teen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hippie_teen

Iím only fifteen years old,
And my lifeís already done.
Uncle, I yield, I quit, I fold.
I reach out for the gun.

But then I see your face,
And the tears that would be there.
Putting you in that place,
Is my ultimate fear.

I could not bear the scorns,
Of that much pain and guilt.
Though my conscience still warns,
Of these feelings that Iíve built.

© Copyright 2000 Nathan Preston Langford - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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... the old black rum


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Hey hip, this was a trip..... nicely penned.
Your pretty smart for fifteen.....  

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