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Serenity's Grand Rite

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-19-2000 03:48 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Hairs on arm
reach in feather
static in magnetic
pull--
antennae
of my soul
in yearn--
every cell
in search of you.

I'll lay me down upon the stone.
I'll welcome this, my sacrifice;
to meet your eye in dark eclipse,
spread of wing to fly the night.

Virgin.  Mother.  And the Crone...
For you, High Priestess, sheds her robe...

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 05-19-2000 03:57 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Grand Indeed!!!

Regards, sudhir
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-19-2000 07:43 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I'll lay me down upon the stone.
I'll welcome this, my sacrifice;
to meet your eye in dark eclipse,
spread of wing to fly the night.

Virgin.  Mother.  And the Crone...
For you, High Priestess, sheds her robe...
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oooohhhhh
lovely, lovely
do so love disrobing and sacrifice
mmm mmm mmm
love this gem
sleep is such a waste of poetry time  
later me sweetness
jm
bobbycat
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3 posted 05-19-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Beautiful poem....I knew Diana was smiling down brightly on someone last night. This was wonderful; Blessed Be.  

Christina =^..^=
Sven
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4 posted 05-19-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I too, could feel the power of Diana in the storm and in the air. . . a grand poem my friend. . .

The rite begins. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

serenity blaze
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5 posted 05-19-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Much gratitude to all as always, and bobbycat would also love to correspond with you---e mail me if interested---(I do so love finding my people!)  Another moon glow to bask in tonight....now where's that broom?  lol....
Parker
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6 posted 05-20-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Alrighty then.... serenity I didn't know you were into stone sacrificial rites. Where did I put my druids robe, darn I'll just have to go robeless if thats ok by you. Why am I asking you, like your the sacrifice. Where did I put my symbolic knife......  
spiked
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7 posted 05-20-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

This is beautiful.
you have helped me shed that
tear I wrote of.
Thank you
serenity blaze
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8 posted 05-20-2000 02:59 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Parker--you are so naughty I just gotta love
        ya!  And I can't believe you'd have
        trouble finding anything, however
        symbolic...

spiked--Don't gotta love ya, just do. Thanks.
 
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