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BrazilianGirl
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0 posted 05-19-2000 02:42 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl


If I could fly
I bet I d find my way
to be with you
forever and a day

If I could turn back time
I d do this all again
coz nothing can be better
than having you in my place

I swaer to god I wont leave you
for my own mental sake
coz you helped me become
what I am today

life without you cant be fun
no way,
without you honey
Im lost in space

I wrote this childish poem when I was thinking about how much I wish I could run to be with the love of my life. I imagined he was sitting right by my side when he actually is 1000000 miles away
thanks for reading
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vphantom
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1 posted 05-19-2000 04:05 AM       View Profile for vphantom   Email vphantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vphantom

beautiful poem, I can actually relate to the way you feel.  And yet your love is so far away, it is the distance between the two of you that makes the heart grow fonder.

                                Vphantom

--The face is the mirror of the mind and the
   eyes confess the secrets of the heart.--
                                St. Jerome

                                
Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


2 posted 05-19-2000 04:15 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

He is a SPACEMAN or a MARTIAN  

By the way, Lovely sentiments expressed here

Regards,
sudhir.

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
BrazilianGirl
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3 posted 05-19-2000 04:41 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl

hehehe not a martian but just as weird!!!  
I love him anyway! He is in North Dakota and I am all the way south in BRAZIL. So I guess... very very very far
thanks for the replies!
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4 posted 05-19-2000 07:15 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BrazilianGirl~
It can't be easy longing for someone so very far away ... just send your heart to him as you did in this sweet poem.

Distance is irrelevant to a heart.
You never know ....  
Nice sentiments.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
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5 posted 05-19-2000 07:22 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Come on up here, Brazilian Girl, to visit him. And visit me, too. In the meantime, send him this poem, He won't think it childish. Ele vai gostar.
Muito bonita, a poesia
Lindo, seu coracao
Abracos
Liz
 
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