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Marge Tindal
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Me Too
~*Marge Tindal*~

Sing to me of love
Caress me with a smile
Say I'm all you've needed
for such a long, long while

Hold me in your arms
Talk to me of dreams
Tell me what makes you laugh
though silly it seems

Whisper to me of thoughts
you've held too long inside
Tell me of your ambitions
tell me with pride

Tell me how you love me
then when your heart is through
listen as I repeat what you've said
Those are the things ... I also feel for you






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
devina
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1 posted 05-19-2000 01:47 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is just perfect Marge...romantic and touching for sure!!! Hope all is well with you Ms. Sunshine....he he

Love you!!
~D


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Corinne
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2 posted 05-19-2000 01:51 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Very lovely and uplifting, Marge!

Corinne
Rosebud1229
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3 posted 05-19-2000 02:25 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

very eloquently said Marge, loved your poem.

 
tracie66
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4 posted 05-19-2000 04:03 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Marge you always have the most beautiful things to say and I love to read every word   thankyou for being such a perfect poet with awesome talent.
Tracie~  


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


vphantom
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5 posted 05-19-2000 04:13 AM       View Profile for vphantom   Email vphantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vphantom

Marge,

Everytime I read your work, you just make me wanna melt.  You writing is exquisite and I can only wish I can write like you.  The person you wrote this poem for is a very lucky person.

Vphantom

--The face is the mirror of the mind and the
   eyes confess the secrets of the heart.--
                               St. Jerome

Denise
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6 posted 05-19-2000 10:23 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful and sweet! Love it!

Denise
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


7 posted 05-19-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Marge, your title encompasses the "secret message" I give to my loved one when I cannot "talk" at work...

as always, you are an inspiration!
Danny Holloway
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8 posted 05-19-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Marge, you are such a romanatic!  But then, aren't all poets?  Very nice poem!
thanks for the e-mail.


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 05-19-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Whisper into my ears, words tender,
Make the melodies of my heart escape my lips,
Sing to me, loving lyrical wonder,
Take me in your arms, my soul flips.

Make me feel loved as I do to you,
Speak to me, sweet little verses,
Then hear me say the words 'I love you',
Lets each other be in love rehearses...

Marge, you are ever so romantic, I really like reading your poems, so soothing, and lovely flow....

Regards,
Sudhir



 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-19-2000).]
Meadowmuse
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10 posted 05-19-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Me too, Marge, me too! I love it too!!  

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 05-19-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marge~
Perfect title!!!  I see that you are a romantic at heart, my friend.  Very inspiring writing!!  
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 05-20-2000 06:05 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina~
MsSunshine is just fine, cutie pie.

Corinne~
Thank you, dear lady.

RoseBud~
I thank you so much, my dear.

Tracie~
HUGS from my heart.

VPhantom~
How I appreciate your thoughts.  Thank you so much for your kindness.

Denise~
You are always there to lift our spirits.
Thank you.

Danny~
I plead guilty to both charges !

Sudhir~
I am pleased to give you the pleasure.
Thank you so much for your inspired response.

Claire~

Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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