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Reflecting Love. . .

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Sven
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0 posted 05-19-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

This is a challenge poem. . . to find out what kind of a challenge it is. . . go to the Poetry Challenge forum for details!!!

Reflecting everywhere in love
Her first passion is
This desire of life
His wonder is alive
Very beautiful touching heart
Beating with desired yearning
Joining together in love
This is love is this
Love in together joining
Yearning desired with beating
Heart touching beautiful very
Alive is wonder his
Life of desire this
Is passion first her
Love in everywhere reflecting

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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1 posted 05-19-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Challenge Beautifully met Sven, do you ever write a bad poem? LOL

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
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2 posted 05-19-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

*sigh* amazing....I read the challenge, then searched for the poem...you've done something that seems beyond me!!!  
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3 posted 05-19-2000 03:12 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Just a minute while I put down my mirror.......OK, this was so cool!  Every well done!

Marina
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4 posted 05-19-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Great poem, Sven.  Excellent idea for a challenge!!  Will do my best to come up with something...

LW
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5 posted 05-19-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Oh Sven, you write so amazingly lovely...(I believe serenity just cooed...)  Sveetness all the vay....
Sven
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Thank you all. . .

Isis, thank you, and yes, I have written some bad poems, just haven't posted them here!  LOL

deVine, I don't believe that this is beyond you, give it a try. . .

Marina, I could hold that mirror for you. . .LOL. . .thank you for your reply. . .

LW, thank you. . . I'm sure that you'll be able to come up with something. . .

serenity, thank you so much. . . I believe that you're making me blush. . .  

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monique
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Can i borrow your mirror
I don't see nothing in mine
i am so blind that i can't see
the truth naked before my eyes
it is so pure to be truly in love

monique
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Finely crafted Sven.

Jon
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I was thinking of taking the challenge
but then I realised I could never write one that was even a shadow of what you wrote. very clever, and also a great poem.  
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10 posted 05-20-2000 12:20 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . .

monique, take another look. . .you might need to polish that mirror. . .

Jon, thank you very much my friend. . .

brian, thank you, but I've just read your poem and it is very finely crafted on its own!!  You did an excellent job. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Sven
AbSoLuTeLy AmAzInG

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