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Isis
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0 posted 2000-05-19 12:37 PM


This is a poem written by both Sven and myself.  Hope you all enjoy it as much as we enjoyed writing it!!

From his palace on high the great God Ra,
Saw that the world was a dismal place,
Not full of his light and love,
As it was when he created this space.

So he searched the world, Heaven and Earth,
For one with the same vision as he,
Finding nothing, out of the darkness he created Isis,
Sovereign of the Spirit, daughter of the Earth.

Together as one they stand,
Defying all evil and hatred,
Showering the world with a mystical love,
So the human demise is never fated.

Standing with his child of creation,
His love her sword, her light her shield,
They rescue those in need of strength,
To evil they will NEVER yeild!

Their love of life brings hope to all,
From age to age their battle rages on,
Defenders of love, keepers of the light,
Bringing dawn to the darkest of nights.

So all young lovers remember the tale told here today,
From Isis and Ra take your cue,
Journey the road of truth and love,
And there will be magic in all that you do.




 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-05-19 01:02 AM


and there is magic coming from the pens of you two.
this is PERFECT and how great of a match up
two of my favs together.
great poem guys!!
more more...encore  
later-poet-gators
jm

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2000-05-19 01:15 AM


Nice, nice, work you guys, what a combo, great allusion and imagery--serenity salutes.
bobbycat
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3 posted 2000-05-19 02:41 PM


You know, when my son was only 6 months old, he loved to point up at the sun and say "Ra, Ra, Ra," over and over--and we hadn't told him anything about the Gods yet.  Magic and love, indeed....  

This was an excellent poem; you two should work together more often.  I loved it.  

Christina =^..^=  

Marina
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4 posted 2000-05-19 03:05 PM


You guys make a great team.  Very well done.

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-19-2000).]

brian madden
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5 posted 2000-05-19 03:10 PM


Great team work, fantastic poem.
Isis
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6 posted 2000-05-19 06:28 PM


Thanks everyone!!!  I hope we do get to do more together soon  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
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7 posted 2000-05-19 06:44 PM


I loved this one..and by two of my favorite poets.  Wonderfully Written you two...I agree..encore encore!!!

daniel

Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2000-05-19 09:45 PM


Isis and Sven,

Great poem you two!!  Not surprised to see this tandem....your styles compliment each other well.  

LW


Sven
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9 posted 2000-05-20 12:29 PM


Thank you all. . . we figured since everybody else was collaborating on poems, then why not us?    

Glad that you all liked it as much as we enjoyed working together. . .

-------------------------------------------------------------



 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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10 posted 2000-05-21 07:53 PM


Thanks Daniel and Lone Wolf yes our writings seem to compliment the other.  Stay tuned maybe we'll do another soon  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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