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Message From The Gods(Combined works by Isis and Sven)

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Isis
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0 posted 05-19-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

This is a poem written by both Sven and myself.  Hope you all enjoy it as much as we enjoyed writing it!!

From his palace on high the great God Ra,
Saw that the world was a dismal place,
Not full of his light and love,
As it was when he created this space.

So he searched the world, Heaven and Earth,
For one with the same vision as he,
Finding nothing, out of the darkness he created Isis,
Sovereign of the Spirit, daughter of the Earth.

Together as one they stand,
Defying all evil and hatred,
Showering the world with a mystical love,
So the human demise is never fated.

Standing with his child of creation,
His love her sword, her light her shield,
They rescue those in need of strength,
To evil they will NEVER yeild!

Their love of life brings hope to all,
From age to age their battle rages on,
Defenders of love, keepers of the light,
Bringing dawn to the darkest of nights.

So all young lovers remember the tale told here today,
From Isis and Ra take your cue,
Journey the road of truth and love,
And there will be magic in all that you do.




 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-19-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

and there is magic coming from the pens of you two.
this is PERFECT and how great of a match up
two of my favs together.
great poem guys!!
more more...encore  
later-poet-gators
jm
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2 posted 05-19-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Nice, nice, work you guys, what a combo, great allusion and imagery--serenity salutes.
bobbycat
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3 posted 05-19-2000 02:41 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

You know, when my son was only 6 months old, he loved to point up at the sun and say "Ra, Ra, Ra," over and over--and we hadn't told him anything about the Gods yet.  Magic and love, indeed....  

This was an excellent poem; you two should work together more often.  I loved it.  

Christina =^..^=  
Marina
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4 posted 05-19-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

You guys make a great team.  Very well done.

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-19-2000).]
brian madden
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5 posted 05-19-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Great team work, fantastic poem.
Isis
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6 posted 05-19-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks everyone!!!  I hope we do get to do more together soon  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


dhuron
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7 posted 05-19-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

I loved this one..and by two of my favorite poets.  Wonderfully Written you two...I agree..encore encore!!!

daniel
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8 posted 05-19-2000 09:45 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Isis and Sven,

Great poem you two!!  Not surprised to see this tandem....your styles compliment each other well.  

LW

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9 posted 05-20-2000 12:29 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . . we figured since everybody else was collaborating on poems, then why not us?    

Glad that you all liked it as much as we enjoyed working together. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
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10 posted 05-21-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks Daniel and Lone Wolf yes our writings seem to compliment the other.  Stay tuned maybe we'll do another soon  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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