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CMGrimm
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   Our Kiss


She closes her eyes
and I gently
place my lips against hers,

so soft and warm...

I can taste her sweetness,
like tiny drops of dew
on the petals of a
tiny buttercup.

Our world intertwines,
for a moment
we become as one
and the rest of the world
is forgotten...

Christopher M. Grimm




 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


© Copyright 2000 Christopher M. Grimm - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 05-18-2000 10:12 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

AHH...SUCH SWEET ROMANCE!

Loved reading this one....so soft and elegant

All my love,
Jeffrey

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but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

CMGrimm
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Thanks Jeffrey...

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


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Chris,
I want to know who taught you how to kiss?!?! LOL I love the whole poem...great imagery.  
love & all,
-Holly
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4 posted 05-19-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ChrisG~
Too tempting !
I like.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 05-19-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

MMmmmuch sweetness...made me smell a waft of flower, held my breath, I did...lovely.
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6 posted 05-21-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Serenity- just breath hun....lol

Marge- I love temptations almost as much as I like to succumb to them...

And Holly- practice makes perfect you know...

thanks all...


chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


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7 posted 05-21-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Not sure I remember those emotions...LOL!
I really liked your style here...very lovely, Chris.
Marie~
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Chris! Wow! Great sweet kiss and well written
poem ---   but, alas am warmed up,
want some passion LOL

warmly,
netswan
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9 posted 05-23-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Chris,

BEAUTIFUL,BEAUTIFUL,BEAUTIFUL

Love,  Cerenity

Crystal Lynn
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beautiful poem...i envy the gurl who mad that much of an impression with just one kiss  
Angel
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11 posted 05-23-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

~Sigh~ It was absolutely beautiful.  You captured the feelings a kiss evokes perfectly. I loved every last word   .

~Susie


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~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood"



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12 posted 05-29-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks All...

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


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