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Tom26
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since 2000-05-07
Posts 30


0 posted 2000-05-18 09:48 PM


Hey everyone

I missed reading everybodie's poems while I was upstate for a few days. This poem I wrote a while ago, but I still think it's good.

You’re the only one I see the crowd
You’re the only one I hear in the static
You’re the only one I feel in the darkness
You’re the only one that’s ever wanted me
You’re the only one I need
You’re the only one that’s made me feel special
You’re the only one that’s me feel love
You’re the only one that made me believe
That dreams do come true
And you’re the only one that will hear me say
I love you




 Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like nobody's watching- Anonymus

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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-18 09:52 PM


Welcome back Tom!
Ah, so sweet -- great love poem!

netswan

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-18 09:53 PM


~Tom,...this is perfect.  Well said,....great little read here.
Tom26
Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30

3 posted 2000-05-18 10:49 PM


Thanks you guys for your comments, but I think I typed one line wrong. Oh well.

 Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like nobody's watching- Anonymus

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