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Patience Personified
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Patience Personified |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Good things come to those who wait Or so the saying goes And as to what the future holds Nobody really knows I used to think I'd drift forever Upon life's empty sea On a vessel with no sails or steam No one to rescue me I'd lost all hope of loving again And waited for death to concede When in a dream I saw her face Revealed so mystically **************** Now as I lie here by her side All I can do is sigh Good things DO come to those who wait PATIENCE PERSONIFIED Thank you Lone Wolf for the title and challenge  I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Now I am speechless...this is so tender and sweet, m'friend. Love it!! Challenge exceeded....you're welcome...anytime. Great writing!! Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A good lesson for us all. I want patience and I want it RIGHT NOW!!!! Nice tribute, Jeffrey. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
OH Jeff, think this is one of your best that I have read! Excellent, my friend ---loved it. But stand with Balladeer I want it now.LOL netswan |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Mr. Jeffrey Carter,....this is wonderful. Well done sir...love it lots  |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Fantastic Jeffrey.... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Very nice sentiments, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL at BALLADEER NOT BEING PATIENT LOL jeffery this is PERFECT!! and one of my favs by you, witty, clever and sweet. your writing is growing daily... must be the inspiration huh?  wonferful writing. jm |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is simply wonderful Jeff. She is indeed lucky that you were. Marina |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Great job. Thanks for sharing. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very beautiful, Love does change the outlook on so many things,what once was an empty sea is filled with fish galore! hehe. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Insightful message, superbly delivered. Happy for you. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Jeffrey Your tender heart is showing again in this beautiful love poem. It's superb. Love, Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so very lovely, Jeffrey! Denise |
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