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Love's Affliction

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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 05-18-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

Love is so many things
So much more than a passing fling
It can make you happy or make you sad
When you're in love you feel so glad

But once things begin to sour
Time drags on for each and every passing hour
Feels like withdrawal from addiction
But it's only love's affliction

When you get it you'll know you got it bad
What once made you happy now makes you sad
You pray for your suffering to end
And that some day your heart will mend

Mentally it really takes a toll
You wonder if you'll ever feel whole
Some day the suffering will cease
Then a new life awaits if you sign the lease



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 05-18-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Love's affliction.....hmmm....wonder where you got the idea to write this wonderfully wriitten (sad) yet hopeful poem?  hehe

great response to my challenge to you LW

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Lone Wolf
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2 posted 05-18-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Jeffrey,

LOL...you know where the idea came from..you!!  Thank you...always love a challenge you know!!     Glad you liked it, m'friend!

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
netswan
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3 posted 05-18-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

LoneWolf  this is very good ---I see
in your poetry that hope is in your eyes.
Loved the Read.

hugs from
netswan
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4 posted 05-18-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~It IS so many things,....boy is it ever!!!  Great post,..thanks for sharing.  
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 05-19-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

netswan,
Thanks!!  Yes, it is there....hope.  Glad you liked it!!  

SpitFire,
yes, it is many things!!  You are welcome!!  



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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6 posted 05-20-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~~~Sign the Lease~~~~
nice writing LW
CocoBaci
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7 posted 05-20-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Wolf, your writing never ceases to amaze me.
.. "if" you sign a new lease..caught my heart the most.

CocoBaci
Lone Wolf
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8 posted 05-20-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Danny,
As we speak...thanks!

CocoBaci,
Thank you, very nice of you to say.  Catches my heart too, but sometimes we have to do these things.

LW
Janet Marie
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9 posted 05-20-2000 11:35 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

i crave loves affliction ...
it is my hearts addiction.
its like a mad obsession...
it owns me like a possesion.
LOL
couldnt resist
great poem here LW...
well written and great rhyme.
love that last line...
I just rent these days LOL  
later, jm
Rosebud1229
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10 posted 05-21-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

Lone Wolf truly love is so many things, I loved your poem , words flowed so easily,

 
Lone Wolf
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11 posted 05-21-2000 12:34 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Janet Marie,
Thank you for the rhyme!!  LOL...I just lease too these days.  Someday we'll buy it!!  

Rosebud,
Thank you...love is so many things...wish I had the time to list them all.  Thanks for reading!!  
Cerenity
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12 posted 05-22-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Lone Wolf,

Boy did you say it oh so right time goes by really slow when loves on the rocks!!! Wonderful poetry.

Love,  Cerenity
Cyndey
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13 posted 05-22-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

Lone Wolf...
This poem is amazing! That you were able to express into words all the chaotic emotions that one experiences when falling in and out of love or when the relationship is over, and you must move on... a truely heartfelt poem!   Cyndey
Lone Wolf
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14 posted 05-22-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Cerenity-1,
Thank you and I know all too well it does.  Hope it moves faster for you.

Cyndey,
Thank you very much.  Just expressing my feelings as usual.  Glad you enjoyed it!!  




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--Michael W. Smith
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