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the migration of the birds 1

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rene
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0 posted 05-18-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rene

hands cold as dawn again
molesting the grooves of my spine

fireflys boasted the night again
ugly and serene

lips full of lies again
red suffocating in the air

the revolt of the prisoners again
(they built a new society)

wounds as open as eyes again
purpose and the elite

mean nothing again
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netswan
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1 posted 05-19-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Rene - what a woeful sad tale.

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rene
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2 posted 05-20-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rene

thanks
brian madden
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very dark, I love the concise nature of the poem, this one got me thinking.Great poem.
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