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The Beauty of a Rose
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The Beauty of a Rose |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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The beauty of a rose Sweet goddess of the petalled realm With velvet folds of crimson red Awakens with the morning sun And reaches out from flower bed Why so enchanting no one knows That is the beauty of a rose Sweet cooing of the mourning dove At dawn she opens up my eyes She croons a melody so soft That sounds of lovers lullabies The music drifts from eves above That is the cooing of a dove Sweet teardrops sit on rose and leaf The crystal balls of morning mist Til sun embraces with its warmth And melts them with a loving kiss As fresh and pure as words from you That is the early morning dew Awake me at the brink of dawn Like soft enchantment of a rose And croon a lover’s lulliby As dove sings songs that no one knows And melt the morning’s crystal mist With warm embrace and loving kiss Elizabeth Santos |
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rene Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113 |
holy moses, that is sweet as pie. excellent use of imagery |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It gets no better than this, Liz. What a flow-er you are. This poem is as smooth as silk and flows like honey....none of which surprises me since you wrote it  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Wonderful, wonderful poem. Love Sy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ I know you you won't agree. But don't you dare argue with me ... I think you've written a self poet-rait!  Love you bunches. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Sweet - beautifully written poem. I loved it, Elizabeth. Thanks netswan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Simply beautiful Elizabeth. . . simply beautiful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Very well written....mezmerizing even All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Beautiful poem. I can almost see this beautiful rose in my mind. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Elizabeth ... What a poem ! you really wrote a beauty with this one Rex |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Liz, this is lovely....like you are!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your lovely comments You warm my heart Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Elizabeth! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
hummm, goal number one...write like Miss Elizabeth... goal two - work on goal number one |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise, Thank you Sunshine, You're so sweet Love you both Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Liz, I must agree with our Miss Marge...this poem is a direct reflection of your lovely, gifted self. The breath of beauty at its most exquisite... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh Liz, this beauty you write of flows right from that heart of yours! BIG and BEAUTIFUL IS YOUR HEART Extremely well written! Can you hear this *dove* singing a song you don't know? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Claire, I'm so happy you liked his,thank you so much Love, Liz WhtDove, Thanks, dear, I think you've described your own Love you Liz |
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BrazilianGirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29 |
hey liz, Beautiful poem.I loved it!!! you from brazil too? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, Brazilian girl! Sou casada com brasileiro, e morei 2 anos na Bahia e passei ums meses no Rio e em Santos, SP. Isso foi muitos anos atras. Estamos aqui na Pennsylvania desde '71. Thanks, dear Love, Liz |
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