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Redwriter1's Challenge - Just The Same

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Lone Wolf
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since 03-16-2000
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Lansing, MI USA


0 posted 05-18-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

Some people may laugh
Others may just stare
They see only half
Of what was once all there
If they knew the story behind that piece
Laughter would be the last thing they'd release

I'll never forget that warm summer day
Or the railroad tracks where you decided to play
They said to be careful and step back
You didn't listen so now a hand you lack
Couldn't get loosse when the train came
Doesn't matter to me I love you the same

Would stand beside you come what may
Regardless of what others have to say
True beauty we know comes from within
So never to them should you lower your chin
Hold your head high and walk tall and proud my friend
I will be here by you until the end

The missing piece doesn't bother me any
The tasks you can do still number many
Oh how quickly things can change
If they knew, they wouldn't look at you strange
So lean on me when the going gets tough
Together we'll tackle all obstacles regardless how rough

Sorry this took so long, Redwriter1....been a busy week!!!  Hope it is what you were looking for!!



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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netswan
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1 posted 05-18-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lone Wolf this is wonderful -
such a strong friend you are.
I wish more had taken this challenge up

Well done!!!
hugs from
netswan
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 05-19-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

netswan,
Awe...thank you!!!  I wish they had too.  It was a good one...made me dig deep.  
LW


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