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When I saw her with another man

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Ixtab
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0 posted 05-18-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Ixtab   Email Ixtab   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ixtab

Hate me she pleaded.
Ask for the moon not to phase
for the sun not to rise
for rain not drop
for thunder not to sound
I answered...

And my eyes became water
my knees sustained a dead weight
opression of uselesness
dire heart sadly pumping
my unfelt, thick , blood.

Why did i fly into hell?
a road well cautioned it was
but blind love's guide
is the goddess of insanity

Who could know love
without tasting bitterness?
who could know victory
if fallen ye havenīt.

Hate me she pleaded

So I Will

Let the moon be always full
night be eternal
rain shoot to the sky
thunder be mute.
our love die.
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netswan
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1 posted 05-18-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi There Ixtab - what a great poem.
Wonderful

netswan
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2 posted 05-19-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ixtab~
You know what ?
I like this.
Raw emotion told with such feeling.
You've got some great lines in here.
~*Marge*~


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Temptress
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3 posted 05-19-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Wow! This is very sad, but very truthful. Overall I enjoyed it...especially the way you ended it.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
Poet deVine
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4 posted 05-19-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Hey! Long time no see!!! This is a good poem..nice to read you again.  
Angelwings
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5 posted 05-19-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

Wow~
This is told with such feeling.  It's painful to let a love die but it's healthier that way.  Thank you for sharing your pain it makes other feel that they aren't alone either.  I enjoyed reading your work and look forward to doing it again.

A dream is only impossible once you stop dreaming!
JamesMichael
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6 posted 05-19-2000 08:45 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Well written with lots of feelings and emotions.   James
 
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