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Just a Little kiss
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Just a Little kiss |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Just a Little Kiss A simple kiss to say good night What harm could one kiss do? Just a touch upon your lips As soft as morning dew An insignificant event In lifetimes of mankind Just a little kiss to taste The sweetness of the wine A meager innocent passing touch A flutter of a wing A simple little kiss To make my heart and spirit sing Nothing lost and nothing gained An uneventful kiss So that I will well recall The unevents I didn’t miss Let nature take its course, my love And streams flow where they may Perhaps this uneventful kiss Unfolds a love to stay Just let me say good evening With a press upon your lips The sweetest words of love Are sometimes spoken in a kiss Elizabeth Santos |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Ah, Elizabeth, what a wonderful poem. Yes, a kiss, a simple kiss - how many words does a kiss hold? Beautiful netswan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A simple ask An uneventful thing. A simple task Covering a longing. A simple mask But magic it would bring. Love this. Love Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let nature take its course, my love And streams flow where they may Perhaps this uneventful kiss Unfolds a love to stay Just let me say good evening With a press upon your lips The sweetest words of love Are sometimes spoken in a kiss ----------------- and the poet who penned this jewel needs to be kissed!! this is such a perfect poem Liz!! I love it. lovely words and emotions. take care, jm |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Netswan, Sy, Janet Marie A kiss for each of you Love Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liz I had to read about this little kiss...you wouldn't have to twist my arm...I could even offer a big kiss. James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ Angel kisses you impart knowing they come straight from your heart *KISSES* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
James, That's an offer I can't refuse Liz Marge, Thanks for all your support, my angel friend Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Elizabeth! Beautifully written! Denise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A little kiss??? A kiss on the palm, "I salute thee" A kiss on the cheek, "I befriend thee" A kiss on the forehead, "God bless thee" A kiss on the lips, "Cross my heart, I love thee" A kiss with tears, "Sorry have to leave thee" A kiss unreturned, "Spurned" A flying kiss "Good bye" A kiss, a single kiss, a little kiss.... By the way, Liz, before I get carried away, let me salute you for this beautiful poem that you have written and posted.... Regards, sudhir. Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise. Thanks for your comments Sudhir, Here's a kiss on the cheek for you. Thank you, my friend Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oooh, I love this! Corinne |
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