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A Mother's Love

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Ardonida
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0 posted 05-18-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

I am not sure that this was submitted, but here goes again, after reading some of the work done here, I stand with my mouth open and wondering if I will ever get to those standards. Once again, I hope you will enjoy this one!!

A Mother's Love
A mother's love is not only in her heart,
but attached to every nerve in her body,
it does not only run through her mind,
but also through the blood in her vains.

A mother's love is not a gift,
it is a necesaty, cultivated from a little
seen of joy, one that she willingly
devote all her time to.

A mother's love is not a jewel, but
an old rag, there for everyday usage,
with the added respect and honor.

A mother's love is not only for her own,
but for those of all others,
it is in her understanding and sharing,
it is for the world to enjoy!

A mother's love is nothing special, yet every bit just that.
It is not a deed, or a kindness, it is a wisdom and a knowladge,
it is a honor and a joy.

A mother's love is a burdon that she gladly and proudly carries,
A mother's love is more than what you can ever imagine... It is a way of living!!

Adri Sinclair

Copyright 2000 Adri Sinclair

© Copyright 2000 Ardonida - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-18-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

"I stand with my mouth open and wondering if I will ever get to those standards."
Well Adri you just did, that was a fantastic poem, other than one or two typos.
Great imagery..

A mother's love is not a gift,
it is a necesaty, cultivated from a little
seen of joy, one that she willingly
devote all her time to.

"A mother's love is not a jewel, but
an old rag, there for everyday usage,
with the added respect and honor".
I especially i liked that one

"It is not a deed, or a kindness, it is a wisdom and a knowledge,
it is a honor and a joy."


beautiful, a fabulous first posting welcome to passions.

netswan
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2 posted 05-18-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions, Ardonita -
Lovely first poem and what a great
tribute to mothers!

netswan
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3 posted 05-18-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

Thank you to Nest and Bradden Maiden.
Yeah, I have a prob with typos
Thank you as well for the good thoughts and wishes... I am just glad you liked it!
Ardonida
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4 posted 05-18-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Adri~
A lovely entrance you've made.
From a mom who appreciates your thoughts,
I welcome you to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 05-18-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Welcome to passions

Great first post....waiting for more  

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

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