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A Mother's Love
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A Mother's Love |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
I am not sure that this was submitted, but here goes again, after reading some of the work done here, I stand with my mouth open and wondering if I will ever get to those standards. Once again, I hope you will enjoy this one!! A Mother's Love A mother's love is not only in her heart, but attached to every nerve in her body, it does not only run through her mind, but also through the blood in her vains. A mother's love is not a gift, it is a necesaty, cultivated from a little seen of joy, one that she willingly devote all her time to. A mother's love is not a jewel, but an old rag, there for everyday usage, with the added respect and honor. A mother's love is not only for her own, but for those of all others, it is in her understanding and sharing, it is for the world to enjoy! A mother's love is nothing special, yet every bit just that. It is not a deed, or a kindness, it is a wisdom and a knowladge, it is a honor and a joy. A mother's love is a burdon that she gladly and proudly carries, A mother's love is more than what you can ever imagine... It is a way of living!! Adri Sinclair Copyright ©2000 Adri Sinclair |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
"I stand with my mouth open and wondering if I will ever get to those standards." Well Adri you just did, that was a fantastic poem, other than one or two typos. Great imagery.. A mother's love is not a gift, it is a necesaty, cultivated from a little seen of joy, one that she willingly devote all her time to. "A mother's love is not a jewel, but an old rag, there for everyday usage, with the added respect and honor". I especially i liked that one "It is not a deed, or a kindness, it is a wisdom and a knowledge, it is a honor and a joy." beautiful, a fabulous first posting welcome to passions. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Ardonita - Lovely first poem and what a great tribute to mothers! netswan |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
Thank you to Nest and Bradden Maiden. Yeah, I have a prob with typos  Thank you as well for the good thoughts and wishes... I am just glad you liked it! Ardonida |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Adri~ A lovely entrance you've made. From a mom who appreciates your thoughts, I welcome you to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions Great first post....waiting for more All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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